It was a good chapter but... i cant wait for more!

I love this story! Update soon please!

A good transition chapter.

I laughed out loud about the fu-fu-fu... hilarious. My mother looked at me like I was odd.. perhaps I am xxx

Please, please, please make another chapter as quickly as possible... because I'm drawn to this and I absolutely love it! I can't wait for more :D

Well, they are one, as he says over and over, right? It really should go both ways.

Anders has dig a hole so deep that he needs a periscope to see grass roots.

ANGST in the extreme! But I love it!
Let's ride this emo-train together shall we? xxx

I love this story! Please continue!

Love the set-up! And the character growth for Hawke! Nice moment with Fenris too! :D

I cannot even begin to express the amount of disappointment I felt when I realized I had no more chapters to read. I can't wait for more! :)

Oooh! The ending was surprising! Love the action! :D

And the tension between Hawke and Anders continues to rise! As for the rating, if you're confident at writing at a M and you really are sure you want to - then why not? :)

Oh! All the dramas!

Everyone's on Anders's case! Poor guy needs to clean himself up, and work out his thoughts. They seem contradictory at times. Justice...

Oh no! Hawke and Carver! :o

Hawke needs to find out Carver's alive. I'm sure he wrote her a letter too. By the way, love the idea of Carver writing Merrill too! Wondering how this'll turn out...

Poor sad Hawke story! :( Poor Hawke! *hugs*

And then the Bartrand betrayal. The Deep Roads are moving right along. I hope Anders gets a chance to talk to Hawke. And Carver! It's getting closer to that time!