| Reviews for You've Got a Hold on Me |
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   tschra46 chapter 7 . 8/1 I like how you really delved into the psyche of Vegeta. The lemons were brilliant and the tension was perfection. Great read! |
| Writersblock42 chapter 7 . 10/25/2017 Wow... that was amazing. Such a good read! I wish there was more! |
| Princess-Spoon chapter 7 . 6/28/2016 Holy shit... that was incredibly hot, just the right balance of really intense sex and beautiful writing...I am late to the party, but I am so glad this chapter got finished! If there's more to this rolling around that gorgeous brain of yours, I'd love to see it. Anyhoo, off to see if you've got any more delicious lemons tucked away |
| Musette Fujiwara chapter 7 . 2/9/2016 oh my... I loved this chapter and the whole story. |
| Prl16 chapter 7 . 11/9/2014 Wow, I loved it. |
| LadyBardock chapter 7 . 10/13/2014 :) Really nice :) |
| MallieBuu chapter 1 . 9/28/2014 On be half of the 2014 Semi-annual WJS awards, I am proud to announce that your fanfiction/fanart has been nominated by your fans and will be in the running for a 1st, 2nd, or 3rd place spot on our community and website. 'You've Got a Hold on Me' is Nominated for 'Best Three Year Fanfiction' Our website can be located at w w .com Our Google community can be found under... .com (slash) u (slash) 1 (slash) communities (slash) 110779010367791694420 You will be receiving a banner in turn for your nomination! Please let others know about these awards as well as our cause to keep it up and running! -WJS Nominations |
| Sofia Volpina chapter 2 . 4/4/2014 I like this take on the famous GR explosion, one of my favourite episodes in the DBZ series. You are doing a great job conveying strong emotions in your text and your characters are very well written. Great read, thanks for the wonderful story! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/17/2014 What? No!That's it?! Man this was written so well and damn so good to read...just Damn it all. Thank you for this! |
| dragonbabezee chapter 6 . 1/5/2014 Heh heh, hot... So, her plan was to take "control" and seduce him with gentleness and tenderness? Ha ha! Bound to fail at the first attempt on that one Bulma! Yes, she's a fool, but if he thinks himself a fool too, I wonder why? Is it because he thought he could teach her a lesson by dominating her sexually like that, only to find that he did have some part if him that wanted tenderness and true connection? I hope so. I really liked that bit at the end by the way when he kisses her softly and says "you're a fool, you're a fool." It was my favorite part. |
| dragonbabezee chapter 5 . 1/4/2014 Oh, now I get to some juicy bits! I had to laugh at Vegeta finding the term "dickhead" exotic and exciting sounding! I wonder what Vegeta's going to have to do to "get" all of Bulma. |
| dragonbabezee chapter 4 . 12/11/2013 Hmm nice scene! It's so sad that the reason he reacted so poorly tovher touching him was that he didn't even recognize the reason for it. I can't wait for Bulma to reeducate him. |
| dragonbabezee chapter 1 . 11/27/2013 I like it all ready! Especially that metaphor about Vegeta being a multi fatality car wreck of luxury vehicles! |
| saorin chapter 7 . 10/27/2013 Kudos to you, this is - hands down - the most in-character story I have ever read. I am super impressed with how much detail and accuracy you manage to capture the behaviour of those two. And while writing this, I am very sure that these are two characters that are not too easy to grasp in fan fiction. This is really, really well-written und thought-out. Bravo! |
| Beauty Eclipsed chapter 7 . 10/10/2013 Loving the plot! |
