SO GOOD! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE! Also you should do a one-shot of Starmist's first transformation.

More chapters please but if this is the end of the story I thank you for letting me read it Thank you for letting me read it

The traditional way? I didn't think it was possible for Cybertronians. I need to get to know my Transformers better. Anyway, I love the story. But it almost seems like you've just given up on it. As for story ideas, you could make it to something like Starfrost gets kidnapped and Ratchet has no choice but to use the SynthEn to help and find her. But that's all my opinion. I love what you're doing with this story, I hope that the next Chapter comes real soon. Keep it up.

I am impressed. I like how you made Primus and God the Same person. And, the OOC-ness is actually something I find interesting. Usually when I write stories, I make some characters OOC as well. Anyway, I love the story. Please make more TFP stories.

You gonna update?

Great story so far. Also, the OOC-ness is actually acceptable in this chapter. I mean, if I were in Ratchet's place, I would've acted the same way. Can't wait to read more of your story!

Til All Are One,

- Alpha

Really great. Want more. You should add on some death, violence, and/or tragedy to it.

Plz more

OHMYGOSH I LOVE IT!

PLEASE CONTINUE!
I understand if you have lost the need to continue this story or you can't think of anything, but please try to continue. This story has such potential and it would soooooo good if you ended it.

Awesome!

This is very good good

Well, i saw this after favorited one of my stories, and i like it. And judging by your profile, you're Starmist, right?

I love this story :)

This is a very cute story. Very interesting premise and very detailed. I like it.