Sending Leo to Central America was actually genius! Cannon or not, this still makes a lot of sense why Leo had to be sent to Central America.

I'm just so worried if Karai is actually having... you know, somewhere around the stomach? O.O

Holy crap! Is it even possible to create children with someone who is incompatible to you?!

And Oh my glob, this story is growing more intense in every chapter. Can't wait to see the end!

I am just simply loss for words. i'm supposed to be in bed by now and think about my exams, but your awesome fan fiction writing just keep my butt glued to my seat and my eyes stuck to the screen.

Casey.. you are the biggest, most idiotic jerk in this freakin' universe..

WTF WAS HE THINKING!?

I thought Splinter was rather cruel during his talk with Leo, even more than in the first part or the previous chapters. But still lovin' it! _

The 'My love' part is sweet and, yes, pretty bold. But honestly, you almost gave me a heart attack. This is one of the common love twists: family or love. A very hard decision

Jones, if I could only enter the fiction world, I would have killed you already you effin bastard!

Ok, ok! So chapter 10, the rematch! GAWD! Thas whut ahm TALKIN bout!

I see why you wanted this chap to stand out. Although I don't think it could have stood out more if it was in 3D! I KNEW Donnie had it in him! Lol, it's always the quiet ones you gotta watch out for! I was actually starting to worry for poor ol Case! Gotta hand it to Casey tho, he sure can take as good as he gives!

Loving this story! You ROCK!

this was an amazing fic! so great! Karai and Leo really cute! you are a genius

This is so awesome! No sleep from reading...lol.

I love your imagery and your interaction with characters. This also makes me just fall in love with them all just a little bit more.
Can't wait for the next segment. :D

I am rereading all of The Tender Trap stories and I find it hilarious that Don sarcastically suggests they have a tea party with Shredder... ****SPOILER****

...When that pretty much happens to April in part three!

:') I absolutely love this series. Onward to part three as I want to know whether April and Donnie can have a baby. And since they can empregnate, hehe gotta ask. Since mike and Raph had their first time with prostitutes. Are they going to return and drop the bombshell? Now that will be shocking.

:'( I greatly sympathised for the boy. No one deserves such torture like that. I agree honored should be avenged but not at the cost of performing exactly what has been inflicted as it wouldn't change the fact or give back what was taken and used to shatter the victim. Utterly horrific as I just realised I cried while reading through this chapter. It is obvious the guys aren't going to make it in time and I already can imagine the engaging emotions Leonardo will feel. Awesome sequel though. Can't wait for the third and mike's girl was bit short read but good though. Good work congrats.

Wow just reached the end of your story and was very impressed. I can't wait to read part three. You have inspired me to actually sign up to this site as well so I can receive updates on when you update.

Hey love all your stories - I've only read up to here so far. You're a very skilled writer and I have no problems, although I find it shocking that you've made Splinter so mean! Lmao. But it's all good. Anyway - putting a review on this particular chapter as this is the chapter where Splinter finally reveals his plan for Leo's punishment (to send him to South America). All the chapters up till now I thought I had guessed what the punishment would be so I was actually quite surprised and glad for Leo that he got this instead. Ok you want to know what I thought Splinter would make him do to insure his feelings and relationship with Karai ended? Um well I actually thought the folder would contain textbook medical information on how to get castrated! Yep you had me actually believing Splinter would go that far. Which isn't a bad idea actually - I would totally read and cry over that story if it were written. Oh well.. That's all I have to say for now. Keep writing. I'm going to keep reading.