Love this! :D

North knows more than he lets on, eh?

I love it when people bring up Pitch's dancing! He's really not bad at it. He has nice moves.

Hopefully Jack gets himself figured out soon.

I love the ending. The subtle hint that possibly North knows about Jack and Pitch provides the mind future stories. The way Pitch was affectionate towards Jack at a distance but close showed genuine fondness. It provides the strength of an actual relationship. A decent amount of turmoil between characters. Nailed it.

I was really enjoying this until I got to the romance part, I just don't see Jack and Pitch as a couple. But this is all really well written and the story is really good.

Finished already? And woho, happy end! Those two deserve it ;)
Now I just wonder, if North's onto them or if he meant it in a friendship-way... hmmm. (Maybe you could make a oneshot, showing how they all react to their relationship...)
and really loved Shunks. Now he's just like a overgrown puppy.

A great story!
Though you switched from Seraphina to Emily jane half way through. Other than that, a greasy story that makes me want to write more pitch fics! And I'm not a fan of blackice

Oh, the cheeky bugger. North, what's with the cryptic messages?!
Is this really the end?
Another sequel, I'm begging you!

Very nice! However, isn't the issue of Jack's schedule still there? Or are you not done yet? GAH! Confusion! The romance was done very well, certainly better than anything I could come up with. Great story!

Feels, glorious Feels XDD I was itching to read this after seeing the pic and chapter on DA. Luvluvluvluved it :'D another chapter coming?

Can I please take a moment to giggle an flail like a fangirl? Because this update was absolutely magnificent and, as always, wanting to read more.

Can't wait for more. I love this series.

Poor Jack. I really want to know what happened though...

I can't wait for the next chapter!
It was so cute see how Jack interacted with the kitsune! Tsurara-kun! n.n
I see that you do a lot of investigation to write a chapter, that makes the story more realistic and elaborated. That's something I like about your writting and draw style, the dedication in the details.
I hope that soon Jack talks with Pitch, I want to know what happened!
Take care!

God I hope Pitch heard all that. I wonder if Pitch was around there, and that's why the wind sent Jack there. Or if the nightmare sand would allow Pitch to hear what Jack was saying since he was right next to it. Either way, I just really want Pitch to hear it. Not to mention, no matter how mad he is, I think Pitch would want to take care of Jack now. Since he's kind of a wreck.

Anyway, great chapter. I like the flow of it. And I especially like the ending. I understand that in many cases things get worse before they get better, but now that you seem to have covered that I kinda want to see some light at the end of the tunnel, as it were. Jack and Pitch have been through so much, I think they both deserve to be happy. And I would hate for one misunderstanding to ruin that. ... oops, I'm rambling. sorry. I just really like your story. Please keep up the great work.