what does 'full-strong' mean? makes NOT A BIT of sense!

*looks at last updated date and faints* It had been nearly FOUR YEARS since you've updated! AH! Please, please, PLEASE update! This is an amazing story! I love it and I REALLY want to know what happens next! Please continue it! (Unless you have a really good reason, I will relentlessly ask you to update. IE: you are dead/stranded somewhere without internet ot have had a continual string of family deaths and moving and illnesses) This had been well written and very interesting and I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! Eh...sorry...I get a bit obsessive with things. I'm very persistent and I will never ever give up so you should give in now and continue writing this wonderful story. *gives puppy dog eyes* You know you can't resist the eyes...:D Well, please update soon is all I can say. I don't have any complaints.

~Ari

Oi! You! Yes you with the pen, or whatever you're writing this story with... You can't leave me hanging like this!

Love the story! Give me more...

Only thing that irritates me slightly are all those mysterious conversations that keep on popping up, with poor old me having no idea whatsoever as to what they're going on about! But i know you're doing it to keep suspense in the story, so I don't blame you.

Grtz The Mongoose

Absolutely love this story. Very well-written, impeccable spelling and grammar, and lovely plot. The characters aren't Mary Sues, and it looks as if the ending to this story won't be happy. Pity you haven't updated, but I've had my battles with real life and writer's-block/total-lack-of-interest as well. Just wanted to commend you for great writing.

This story has been one of my fav.I love the plot and is one of the most origanal I have seen in a few days. well, I think you need not change anything. I hope you writing. This comming from a fellow writer.

No. No no no no NO! I swear this is one of the best stories I've read and I've read quite a few. And you leave it off, discontinue it, at a cliffhanger! What's this?

I don't believe it, more people should have been giving you reviews, your story so deserves it! Wow is all I can say to describe your story up to now. Wow.. just wow wow wow... Your original characters are well-developed, your story is so well-written, good humor (bad twinkle!), I love the way yoiu've done snape's character, the idea behind it is awesome, it's suspenseful... this story is everything a story should be except FINISHED. And not even a note explaining why. *sniff* ... you wouldn't consider continuing it, would you? It'd just be such a shame to leave it here. ... *sniff* ...

"That twinkle was going to leave and make her explain to Snape about...everything. Bad twinkle." LOL! You have to update asap! Why does Dove's hand tingle and get the burnt sun mark thing? And is Raven going to die? And ... ARGH! Sorry if I bombared you with reviews - bad habit of mine! But I love the story and what you to continue soon! *gives chocs*

"held the glass to his lips" - her.

I was thinking. The futile knife. You got it from His Dark Materials, right? *cringes* Sorry if I sound rude!

so the reader clicked the dull gray button, and a nice little box appeared. and then the reader spoke "you italicized a part when you weren't supposed to! ("Cautiously, he looked up...all over his face") Also, "started at eh quick" - the. And "werewold" instead of werewolf!"

before pressing another wide button

Wowie? Weird name for a house elf! Only one mistake - when she reads the letter out loud she says both Raven's and Dove's names, but then when they read the letter it only says Misses Thomas.

the viksen thing was cool!

You wrote yes instead of eyes! (he had averted his yes)

The whole Thomas twins and snape relationship is interesting and amusing... very cute!

he seems almost human! o_O

"It isn’t easy for a person to put malice into a blink, but Snape managed" ROFL

I think "quarter ‘til eight" should bee quarter to eight...

The whole animergency and an emergency was funny! This chapter makes me feel so sorry for snape though... he seems a decent person, and so lonely... And me very curious about Drew Alex convo... and Daphne? *Scratches head*

WoW! I sall I can say right now. I haven't read that much yet, but this story definitely deserves more than 25 reviews. It's so original! I think what's putting off the people is the summary... I'll go continue reading now, hoping you've finished as it doesn't seem as if you're going to be updating any more...