I really really liked this story, but what I loved most was your characterizations, really drawing Albus and Scorpius out to make them Slytherins.
I especially loved this line with the characterizations: [ Running away was what cowards would do, but then again, we weren't Gryffindors, were we?].
I also really liked the concept of this fic, but poor Rose. :( That's got to be awful, huh?
Great work!

I don't usually ship AlScorpius - or think of Albus as a Slytherin - but in the context of this fic, it just worked so well (both things, that is). I love the first person PoV, and I think that added a lot to the fic by you using it. Al's voice came through very clearly here, as well, and I like how you characterized both him and Scorpius as so /Slytherin/, sneaking around like that. I do feel bad for Rose, though - it's gotta suck to find out your boyfriend is cheating on you with your male cousin. 'In life, you should hang onto the valuable things and throw away the rest' - that was a wonderful line, and so true, really. I love the characterization of all three characters, I loved the triangle, and basically, this is one of the best AlScor fics I've ever read.

This is my response review for your review on Date Night

Awwww, this was adorable. Poor Rose, though :( She seemed to know something was up, but I bet it was a bit of a surprise to see her boyfriend and cousin getting it on :P

Well done.

I really like what you did with this. Al/Scor is my next-gen OTP, so I loved that aspect of this fic, and then you add the love triangle with Rose and ARGHH it's just all so perfect.

*hearts*

This is just wonderful! :D sorry for the long wait on reviews :)

Even though I love Albus/Scor, poor Rose! :(

Great use of the title in the story! I also really liked how you broke it into segments!

Great work!

Elysium xo

I really like this!
This is the first time I've read both Albus and Scorpius as Slytherins, then again, I don't read much next-gen. Anyways I liked the theme of lies throughout this and the repeated notes that they aren't Gryffindor's so shouldn't act like them. I especially liked the last line. The alliteration of slippery, seventh and Slytherin really flowed well and gave a hiss-like sound (of course, associated with Slytherin)
If this is your first attempt at slash, you should definitely keep on writing it!

Absolutely fantastic! I love the characterisations of Albus and Scorpius. So many people write them as brave, noble Gryffindors, but you wrote them as sly liars and still made them amazing!

Lines I especially loved: 'It was tender and warm and lovely and I knew that we were us.' -A lovely bit of fluff in the middle of angst, which is the best place for fluff :3

'"You have me. What more do you need?" he asked.' -It's a gorgeous line, and, while it seems a little obsessive, it give insight into what their relationship is like.

The ending was just perfect! It brings everything together and makes me want know what happens next. Just a gorgeous, wonderful piece!

Nice, love how you've worked with my title :) I don't normally read Al/Scorpius, but I was really curious, and this is written really well. Loved it, great job :)

[It was tender and warm and lovely and I knew that we were us.]
OHMYGODILOVETHISSOMUCH!

I stand by what I said love - if this is you first attempt at writing slash, it's obviously something you need to write much more of.

This was gorgeous and beautiful and perfect, and I LOVEDLOVEDLOVED the constant mentions of the fact that both Scoripus and Albus are Slytherins and liars and not!Gryffindors.
Because who needs picture perfect heroes and couples when you can have flawed and imperfect villains?

And the fact that they leave their entire worlds and families behind.
["You have me. What more do you need?"]
THIS.
THIS was just perfection &hearts

This is the most gorgeously imperfect AlScor I've read in a long time, so thank you so much for this (:

OOOOOOOO!
Nice! :D
Felt bad for Rose though :/ And I loved that Scorpius showed a hint of vulnerability :D