I have so much FEEELS. It's interesting how you don't have any punctuation, except for a comma/a dash, and without a period at the end of each line, you get the feeling this could go on and on... But it can't because she died and GAH ;( This also manages to recreate the timeline of their relationship pretty well, and my favorite lines (or you can read as the ones that were the most feels-inducing, though most of them were) were when you made the distinction between have sex/make love, and when you ended the whole thing with Gibbs crying... MA HEART.

I'm so..."first time" right now! Wow!

That was beautiful

Interesting one shot!

You are killing me here... :-( So simple yet so heartbreaking. I loved it even though it kind of broke my heart.
It was a great oneshot.

Demi

An authors's note, of sorts, 'cause I'd hate for anyone to think I assumed he didn't grieve over Shannon and Kelly:

I meant the first time he cried over Kate. I kind of imagine he was all stoic at the time, then a few months down the line he went to visit her grave, pay his respects, maybe face things he had not been able to share with his teammates, and then cried for her.

This one is sad... but still great :)
Even if I think Gibbs must have already cried when he lost Shannon and Kelly...

That was simply amazing!:)

So simple but each line evokes memories, visions, touches, feelings between these two, that it's easy to get lost in the lines.