| Reviews for White Rabbit |
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Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2018 Than you for this lovely, dark, and gritty story. Hope you have a nice day. |
Rei0ki chapter 1 . 2/17/2018 This would make an awesome series! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2017 Will there be more will he tell her. Snd what made him put a birus tjing on her usb |
SMSM92 chapter 1 . 7/27/2016 This is an incredible story, darkness and all. It's just depressing because you know they won't have that happily ever after expected for them. Obviously, they will hold on to eachother but their lives will be more difficult, full of more darkness and complexities than their lives in Sailor Moon series with villains and all. I really wish you'd write again at some point... more stories! |
Sigrisee chapter 1 . 7/14/2016 Love It! |
TropicalRemix chapter 1 . 2/24/2016 how did darien hurt his leg? You should write more. I wish they would have a relationship besides working together and just having sex. Have them date. |
kireisnowtenshi chapter 1 . 5/26/2015 Very well written. Loved the subject too. don't get many of these. I loved everything about this. Good job |
Story Unfolding chapter 1 . 2/3/2015 Mind you, I have read this story several times over and I keep coming back to it because I love it. I want there to be more. I like the darker side of their friendship/relationship and I think it would be fabulous to explore what happened in the past and what happens in the future to them. You've created a lot of intrigue with such a little piece. I know it was meant to be a one-shot but can I request more? |
Lazydreamer99 chapter 1 . 8/26/2013 Loved the story and it was intresting. Thanks for the story ;) |
Reactionary Response chapter 1 . 5/6/2013 Every time I read this story, I can feel my heart in my throat. Your writing is so timely, so present, that I feel like I'm there with the characters, or maybe it's just that I want to be. I wish this was more than a one shot! |
ophelietta chapter 1 . 5/2/2013 I love this. And you. And this. Also you. Also Frank Miller! I will have a more coherent review at a time that is not midnight. 3 |
Fiery Dancer chapter 1 . 4/22/2013 I loved the change in style for this fic - no one ever really explores this side of their characters and Im really glad I got to read such an original take :D this is a fantastic fic and Id love to read more! ;) |
Leslie Anne Levine chapter 1 . 4/22/2013 this made me feel things i haven't felt in a really long time. thank you so much. this was fucking amazing. hope for more in the future! |
the grinning bobcat chapter 1 . 4/21/2013 Wow. Obligatory scold: I have invested too much of my life into reading StC. Update! (Love how that sounds like somehow I have more at stake than you do. What I really meant was thank you for however many hundreds of thousands of words you've put out.) Speaking of putting out... But seriously. I'm impressed. Your Dare/Sere has evolved remarkably over time, from violent misleading pseudotragedy to some of the most adorbz fluff ever to however you describe this. Not that I necessarily prefer it to the size of her socks, but it's good, there's no doubting that. The writing, especially, but also the depth and the intensity (somehow). It's definitely not what I expected, but that's another way of saying you've exceeded expectations. It's awesome that you basically wrote the opposite of PWP-you set up all that steam and then cut away. It's sadistic but effective (also written porn is totes awk). I'm not gonna lie, I think I missed a lot of the subtler implications, like who the hell Endymion is (I thought Darien, but then he died, so...) and who the hell's the red suit? I do like the House tribute (so much Huddy), but I think Darien is more of a white rabbit (to Serena's Alice, obvi). Still. I could do worse than more of this! Your fandom is fickle-update anything and you're golden. Pretty please with um, Vicodin on top? |
that1reviewer chapter 1 . 4/21/2013 I loved this! The pacing, the placement of the scenes. I would love to see more of this, but its perfect like it is. :) |