I'm sorry but that whole book was amazing I don't know what to say but it was fantastic. I really hope to see more stories on peeta and katniss.

That was the best story I have ever read (except hunger games) it was so descriptive and I literally cried so hard for some reason, probs felt bad for Katniss. Please don't stop making stories you have a real talent!

This is really good. I love your writing style, and you seem to have the characters down well. I will continue to read this, and I'm sure I'll enjoy. I see that it's been a while since you've updated, so I don't know if you're still writing, but I hope that you are. You have a lot of talent. I got into the HG fandom quite late in the game, lol, but I'm here now, so I'll be doing a lot of reading of fanfiction and some writing myself, once I wrap up some current works.

Thanks for the read! All the best.

-M

Hey, I think your story is great! Something I could never write, but I find the changing time a bit confusing.

the format of this chapter was a bit confusing. you kept changing the time this was happening and i got really confused.

The last chapter is my favourite, this fanfiction was amazing and I hope that you continue to make more fanfictions like this, EverLark forever! :)

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Loved this story, especially how surly, drunken Haymitch can turn caring in a heartbeat when Katniss or Peeta needs him.

I really liked your story I found it every entertaining, to say the least. I find you have an amazing gift, I feel you doubt. I think you have really connected with Katniss and played her part amazingly. Thanks!

I love it. I was up 24.7 reading this and I love it.

my fave part is the end I'm so happy katniss and peeta has a happy ending.i read mocking jay 3 times trying to figure out the end "Epilogue" and I read this and it made a lot of sense.

You are such an amazing writer!
Was so disappointed when this ended!
I would love for you to continue their story, it's so well written and I love reading it :)

I think this chapter was the best chapter out of the entire story. It goes from when Hope was born to Katniss and Peeta's life with her and it was such an amazing chapter! I wish it wasn't over and that it continued but it was still a really good story that the author brought to life!

What I like mostly about this chapter is when Katniss thinks back to the tenth anniversary of the third Quarter Quell celebration with her and Peeta's friends. I think it was very emotional and I loved that and how the author really put pictures in my mind like he/she does every chapter I read.

I like the beginning where Katniss has the urge to clean all the time. I found it a bit funny when she went over to clean Haymitch's house. The way he reacted was funny. I really enjoyed reading this chapter.

This chapter was pretty long but that doesn't mean I didn't enjoy it. My favorite part in this chapter is the meeting that Katniss, Peeta, and the others go to and how Katniss and Peeta make a statement in keeping the government they've had for the past couple of years but it just needs a little modification. It shows that they are true to what they believe should happen in Panem.