The only thing left from what I can see: Who was River Song? Was she Amy and Rory's daughter but just a regular time-traveller, hence the messed-up timelines and them knowing her before she was born? But why would she do that? Circular paradoxes? She had to be there because the told her she was?
Thanks for writing.

I love this story

awesome

Jenny! did not see this coming

I JUST GET THIS FUZZY WITTLE FEELING
EVERYTHING IS PERFECT
GAHHHHHH I LOVED IT

Woa. That was amazing. I love it! Great job with the writing, I'm glad they got to keep the baby!

Loved the story thanks for posting.

PW's has a Sarah Jane *and* a Healthy Donna...he'll be fine with either.

you switched amy for rose what the heck

Amy was seven not twelve it would have bothered me all night if I hadn't said

To answer SomthinOfTheWolf's question river was just a travelling friend who me up with the doctor out f order and all that but they never had a love story, and some point in the doctors future he would've probably met river somewhere for her first time, had I extended the story x

I'm normally a lurker but I just wanted to say that this story was brilliant and fantastic bit I did have a question that I hoped you could answer. Who was River I mean obviously in the show she's Amy and rorys daughter and the doctors wife but in this she's not the doctors wife and you never said if she was Amy and rorys sooo ya like I said it was fantastic

This is... The END?!

NO!

We're missing Jenny the lock-picking Victorian maid!

Wow! Incredibly awesome update and twist! I loved it and would completely enjoy a JennyXJack ficlet. The only point I have would be to make your own dialogue. Fresh, new dialogue is always nice to read and when you are quoting the show word for word it can get a tad boring. Still, a fun chapter! I look forward to mote updates soon!