I love this story

Your making me roll all over the floor laughing. You should be a stand up comedian. Your good at this.

Awesome story I loved it

Rose is a bit ooc. She's not nearly so sweet. She's a bit more teasing and emotional when it's called for.

I would love a sequel it would be cool to see how there life goes with kids and things, you could do a chapter in the future where jackie is dying *sad, but she cant live forever* and the tardis finds enough power to let rose vist her mom one more time, after all alot changed in just five years, and it would be nice if jackie could meet her grandchildren. You could put it in the sequel if you do one.

I really loved this! Great job with it. :D

Fantastic chapter! I loved it! I'm so glad that I have the next chapter to read! :D

wait... Rose is turning into a Time Lord?! now i really have to continue.

thank you for adding the famous Eleven line. "Bowties are cool." My mind was going nuts. Also, having Mickey call Captain Jack his little teaser nickname was awesome.

3rd Paragraph might need a name edit. Hannah?

*CLAP* BRAVO BRAVO...but im sad its over

what the sequel called

Please do more! I enjoyed this series...