THIS IS WHY I HATE KINDLES
I accidentally pressed the post button before I was done :(
Well, anyways, Narook's comfort food for Tahno was really sweet. I kinda like their relationship.
And sorry that my last review is an incoherent mess. I would have reread it and fixed all my autocorrected errors had I not pressed the post button. I hope it's mildly understandable. Gahhh

WHAT A LOVESTRUCK LOSER
Man, Tahno finally has a good dream and it turns sour at the end. Poor guy. I'm there was supposed to be some significance with the Other Woman at the end of the dream or if she was just a fangirl or something. Her features seemed too directed to be just a nameless background girl Tahno slept with in the past.
But anyways, besides the smutty ending, this chapter made me sad. I really hope he talks to Korra. Because he kind of insinuated that the spiking maybe WASN'T his fault. I don't know how much of the Mako tackling him dream I can take literally, but it sure sounds like Mako could have provoked Tahno. Plus somewhere in the last dream Tahno mentioned waiting that Korra wouldn't suspect him, that she if all people write see the truth. I KNEW it couldn't have straightforward as everyone was letting on.
Oh, add sidenote: Narook's small beries of affection

My HEART IS DYING. Holy moly cannolis I can't... I have... I don't... WORDS. Help, I'm drowning in a sea of feels.

By the way, I've read Personal Record before and now I'm reading it again, and I can say with certainty that it's the best fanfic I've ever read in my entire life. I also never imagined that the second time I would read it would be in the Northeast, during autumn, WHILE it's raining outside... what is this life, even .

ANYWAYS I love you're writing. There, BRO. I came at you.

Talk about a slew of nightmares. I won't lie. this fic was a little disorienting. However, it was also revealing of Tahno's thoughts and feelings. Now if only that last dream had gone just a little differently, and had been real...

You... It...
THIS FANFIC FRUSTRATES ME. My feels... they get stacked up and I'm happy and then you just knock 'em down in one fell swoop! You are WAY too good at these! Never stop writing!

Oh, God, this was so stressful! Why do you do these things? Why must you hurt me this way?

But I really liked getting into Tahno's head for a change, and I also love that is wasn't so clear cut a thing. The way everything was so disjointed and Is-This-The-Real-Life-Or-Is-This-Just-Fantasy really added to the ambiguousness behind the entire accident. And I KNEW HE DIDN'T FUCKING DO IT and, like, I KNEW he didn't do it, but actually knowing for sure fills me with both relief but also righteous fury. And nervousness. You're just very good at this writing thing, okay?

Anyway, thank you for writing this for us. It was great to have and experience alongside your main story.

Beautiful. This couldn't have been more perfect. Best chapter yet. Amazing work.

God, this is beautiful.

I'm having a heart attack... This whole thing is probably the best Tahnorra fic ever... Your writing is beautiful... I need more... /faints

Oh, this was so surreal and angsty and so freaking sexy!

Okay, so the moment his last dream turned into a nightmare made the bottom drop out of my stomach (and my heart jumped to my throat), but it was just so perfect.

Ah! I just want to shake Korra (wherever she's at) and tell her to send the man a text and put him out of his misery. Preferrably followed by some real sexy-times.

Wow. Just wow is all I can think of right now.
I am such a huge fan of this series (and I fully intend on reviewing the other chapters, I'm just..kind of bad with words, admittedly), and I have to say that this is my favorite chapter so far. Maybe it's because things were confusing and illusory, it definitely upped the re-readability. At this point, I'm reading it again, trying to pick up on Tahno's subconscious. You are such a good writer, I don't think I can stress that enough!

Aah! This was so good! I really liked the ending bit and I really love how you write Tahno. I know you're taking a break soon, but thanks for all the great fic, especially for someone who only got 7 minutes of screentime!

Oh man oh man oh man. I think I've read through this four times now...you never stop surprising me Kris, you really don't! Okay, first of all. TAHNO. Just. Tahno. I have been DYING to see inside his head in this fic, especially after the whole incident at the meet, and man did you deliver. I had to admit the last dream I was pretty convinced was real, and then...ugh. I'm pretty sure I've said this a million times, but your writing style, while choppy and sometimes a little rough, is the coolest I've ever seen. Your writing, as I've said before, is a work of art. It pulls you in like a wave and drags you down with every plot twist; I've never felt so involved in in a story. Everything that happens, you can FEEL as a reader. You can feel every frustration, every laugh, every spike of adrenalin. It is such a beautiful thing and if you can manage this with borrowed characters, I can't tell you how excited (and frankly, a little frightened) I am to see what you can do with original work. I wish I could give you some constructive critism, but all I can really be is impressed most of the time and hope some of your glory as a writer will rub off on me. Looking forward to where you'll take this story! (sorry for the cheesy review, as usual)

I loved this chapter.

I liked how you wrote this from Tahno's POV and the whole mood and atmosphere is really hazy, and the dreams! it's like we get to experience being Tahno- the confusion and everything. Ugh I almost thought the last dream was real.

I know im not very articulate here but i just want to say i admire your writing so much! Hurry up and become a published author so I can give you my money and read more! :)

It was confusing (in a good way, because it was intentional, since, as I see it, the way it is written portrays the whole atmosphere) and heart-breaking; so many hopes were crushed in seconds and with this one-shot that just gives so much insight I could really feel the desperation.
I wish I could write a more inspired review, but I guess I'm still suffering the effects this fic had on me.