Short and really sad. I really liked the way it is written.

Very beautiful and sad. Sounds exactly like Ares...so much crushing suffering , so much helplessness and no idea how to let it all out...I loved the concept of letting the Bard cry and mourn for her cause he didn't know how, but he was hurting on the inside and despite the fact that he didn't exteriorise any of his feelings, that was exactly what he was doing, and for him it was even harder because he couldn't possibly cope with reality given the fact that he had never knew loss.
All in all, a wonderful poem. Keep up the good work:)