Good story. Thank you for sharing your talent!

A good Story, i would like to read about the Trial someday. Or write it, if you do not want to do it yourself

Okay...I’m going to be extremely candid here...I hate these kinds of stories. Surely Fate sees that every time Harry is sent back, that the Afterlife’s budget is non-existent. That being said, why exactly did the afterlife not send Harry Potter back with his memories? It doesn’t make sense. From the way this story is written, The afterlife is a business and businesses will cut their loose ends unless they can salvage them. What I don’t understand, is why the afterlife waited until around, say, Harry’s fifth death, (or seventh in some cases) to send him back with his memories. Wouldn’t it make sense for Harry to be sent back with his memories the first time he died, if not for him, then for the afterlife’s budget? Otherwise the story is pretty well written.

Thank you for including in the very first chapter the incredible idiocy about being attracted to a person with the same hair colour of your mother being comparable to incest! Stopped me from wasting time with the rest your fic.

Get the horcruxes early? Doesn't it make more sense to get Riddle first, then the horcruxes? That way you don't have him trying to kill you while you chase them down. He'll be too busy trying to get himself resurrected.

Great story. Sorry to hear it has been abandoned.

Your humor...doesnt really work.

If whatever was passed there became magical enforced law how could anyone ever even begin to try to ursurp the goverment? Just declare a motion that Voldemort and his Death Eaters are forbidden to do magic early on before Voldemort actually managed to have political power. How could he threaten someone? Just declare anyone commiting several crimes instantly loses their magic (or it binds it or whatever).

The point is while it can be a good plot to give someone in the story political power the way it is done here has to much plot breaking potential to work out.

I really hope that you return to this story.

Cette histoire est bien et les personnages Death et Laura sont marrants. Continuerez-vous ? Aurons-nous une fin ? J'espère en tout cas .

i do hope you write more! this idea is so funny and i love it. i love that they are a triad and i love the banter. death and fate and laura make me laugh so much and i love that harry is taking control of his life.

Perhaps the first eight redundancies should be the Marching Band?

I enjoyed what you have written so far. I hope you will continue with the story soon.

More please post more.

interesting story...
hope you will continue it soon :)