Update

The writing is much improved. Thanks for your work.

I am looking forward to chapter 19 and I vote Teen Titans Starfire be added in this story.

Your more of a writer then I'll ever be. I don't even have the patience to write at least a paragraph

Loved it I really like the hurt/comfert romance hope you update soon pls

Make Naruto Tayuyas Sensei In A New Story But Make It A Sequel To This One And She Has A Ddlg Thing And She Feels Like She Owes Naruto Her Everything And Her Life And Make It Naruto X Tayuya And Alot Of Fluff Action Adventure And A Godlike Naruto Plz Cause That'd Be Super Super Super Super Awesome.

so your saying she says nothing to naruto in a month and doesn't get tortured ok

Tayuya has no chill! That was savage!

I look forward to seeing what you do next in this story it has quickly become one of my favorites!

You've made it where the fox could be killed by the silly little Curse mark? I find that very hard to believe I think that's a mistake... But I guess you needed a way to keep Naruto knocked out but still in the chapter

Slight cringe.

This story completely lost me. I hate these sudden moments, where you're told something exists, which, by all logic shouldn't, and then shown that that something goes around one-hit killing everything with the speed of God himself. It's comparable to a trashy OC-biased story where every strong male character becomes weaker than they actually are.

this is an amazing story, can't wait to see more _

I guess I can check this story out

Glad you updated and all but what's with the mood whiplash in this chapter?