Reviews for Coming Of Age
BrightFeatherNYSI chapter 38 . 12/9/2015
Why!?
Poor jor he is the only one left.
BrightFeatherNYS chapter 13 . 12/3/2015
If this is a family dinner then where is Frein because if lees brother is there shouldn't Thorins brother be there.
The-Ginger22 chapter 38 . 1/11/2015
Mandy she was pregnant and the elves keep her there till their son is born then he is part of the company! I don't wanna say goodbye to thoralee
Guest chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
The ending made me cry it's so sad
BeccaBoo1992 chapter 39 . 11/25/2013
So, you are officially one of the few fan fiction writers that has successfully made me cry. *slow clap*
AnneDance1711 chapter 39 . 10/11/2013
Oh my I found this story two days ago and I loved it. You had me crying at the last two chapters. A grate story but a lot of tragedy in it.
JohnGilbertVampirehunter chapter 22 . 8/2/2013
I like how Shia said she's going to marry Thorin when at the moment Thorin would probably like to kill her.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/19/2013
I love Thorin and ThoraLee's quarreling. I know it sounds horrible but I find it very entertaining. So much better then the quarrels I get into with my best friend (who is a guy). Oh and I love that ThoraLee held Dis and got her to be quiet because if you think about it Dis is ThoraLee's future sister-in law
JohnGilbertVampirehunter chapter 4 . 7/17/2013
I'm sorry for asking another question but the two guards you wrote "she learned that the two were married happily" are they married to each other?
JohnGilbertVampirehunter chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
Since Dis is just a few day old baby wouldn't that make JoraLee way older then her?
Dinogeek chapter 39 . 5/22/2013
That was AMAZING! You know what I said earlier about it being a bit like Much Ado About Nothing, well, it really feels a bit Shakespearean now... tragedy!
Then again, Thorin never had kids, and he had no wife when on the quest with the other dwarves (and Bilbo!) so, I guess you had no choice! Oh well, it's easier to deal with than Romeo and Juliet, after all, they had some really fun times, throwing daggers at each other etc. but in Romeo and Juliet, they didn't throw daggers at each other and have fun... so that made it really heartbreaking.

The loss of ThoraLee would also explain how Thorin's so stern in The Hobbit, when I first read the Thorin in this story, I thought 'gee, that's not really like him, is it?' but then again, he was young, and hadn't lost things so dear to him yet.

This'd make a fantabiastic movie! (comedy/tragedy, like the musical Little Shop of Horrors, the comedy makes it easy (er) to handle the tragedy.

Oh well... THAT WAS AWESOME! I just saw you made a sequel.. ooohhhh! Better get reading!

Great story! :)
Dinogeek chapter 38 . 5/22/2013
I have to speak my mind...
SHE'S DEAD! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Wtf chapter 38 . 5/16/2013
NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO. WHY DOES SHE DIE?
valeries26 chapter 39 . 5/17/2013
I really enjoyed the chapter. I'm also sad to see the story to an end. Are you planning a sequel? To see what happen afterwards.
dinogeek chapter 31 . 5/8/2013
THIS IS AWESOME! MORE MORE MORE MORE!
So many plot twists, and wow, she's the Queen of the Nogrods, I was NOT expecting that!
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