Reviews for The Son of Artemis |
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JDT Productions chapter 7 . 2/27/2018 You loose me completely when this becomes a crackfic |
Kirito Swordsman chapter 4 . 12/20/2017 loved the word play with horrible |
blackbelt256 chapter 1 . 11/23/2016 The whole story seems rushed. Honestly, this needs a rewrite, badly. |
FanficFANatic chapter 11 . 9/20/2015 Ok. I thought this was just a PJ & DP cover? I'm so confused...-_- OK lemme try to list all the stories, TV shows,etc. In this ONE fanfic. Tell me if I'm wrong and...GO! DP,PJ,Ben 10,AJ,Thor,Kane chronicles,Spiderman,ATLA,avengers kids(idk what show I'll look it up later), and...I think that's all. NO! Wait! Didn't they mention Shadow was gonna show up? So that includes Sonic as the final price of the puzzle! Keep it up! PEACE OUT!*throws a smoke bomb and crawls out of window successfully*hey! I did-*car runs me over* I'm perfectly OK! |
Lstcryptonian chapter 13 . 7/17/2015 Dude, you just pulled the biggest flaw of writing. Don't control the story. let it guide you how it wants to be written. The muses are our guides. Instead you just decided a brilliant and amazing story wasn't worth writing anymore because its not what you the author wants. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2015 this fanfic was well done! |
holliswalley chapter 12 . 3/29/2015 Well that was a very welcome and appreciated change of pace from the gods not being allowed to have much to do with their demigod children. |
holliswalley chapter 11 . 3/29/2015 I'm beginning to think that you decided to take every superhero universe you could think of and merged them all into one universe then used that universe for this story. To be honest Ive always wondered about the possibilities of such a combination of superhero-filled universes but I never thought I'd read a story that takes place in it. I really like the outcome. |
holliswalley chapter 4 . 3/29/2015 Okay you threw me off there with Dawn's introduction into the story. |
Calypso chapter 8 . 11/18/2014 Omg u have Katara but not anng? |
Funnybombninja chapter 13 . 7/10/2014 YAY See you there. |
x chapter 11 . 6/5/2014 the real hammer thor has is way bigger then the one in the movie a pole a pointy end and a flat end with a precious jewel on either side of the hammer with ruins on the pole that glow on and off like a heartbeat they extend on the hammer bit celestial animation titanium their is a flat end and a pointy on the hammer too. |
x chapter 2 . 6/5/2014 what if Danny at this point or latter got a headache and stated bleeding from his eyes and nose and convulsing and woke up the reincarnated naruto uzumaki with the rinigun and shirigun god half ghost chakra ninja bloodline user badass |
Lance chapter 12 . 5/29/2014 I don't know if you will take a guests word but i have an an account, im just lazy. But this was ammazing. Do more. I like how you made Danny the son of Artemis, and hooked him up with Thalia. You should make it so that Danny and Thalia become gods. Danny becomes the king of Olumpus. He is older than most of the gods. And Thalia takes her dads place. |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/19/2014 At chapter 2 Me:Okay place your bets,Dan escaped didn't he? |