NO WAY! UR KIDDING ME AND ALL UR READERS IF YOU THINK THIS IS FINISHED!

did... did Katara just...- *ugly sobbing* this was amazing!

Hey, I'm new here and I heard from my friend you were really good. So, I checked your writings out :) and I have to say... you are very good! As I can't PM at the moment, do I have to do anything to be part of TEAM ZUTARA? Just asking, by internet froze... and I could read to a point... yeah. :) I would like to join... big fan, I must say.

... oh and great story By the way!
Sorry I went on a bit there, wont happen again :)

Must say I loved this story and how it was written, I just think it was very sad, honestly at point I believed I was going to cry.

Don't fool yourself, it was beautifully written and it is a beautiful story, definitely worthy of a favorite story and author. :)

Oh my god. That was amazing. It was as far from poorly written as you can get. Fantastic job!

-BWM

This was not poorly written at all. It was a captivating tale, emotional and devastating, yet extremely beautiful. I loved it, and will make sure to read more of what you've written.

Well written. Great transitions. The characters' personalities haven't been altered at all. A great opening; I will definitely keep reading this. 3

nicely done!

nicely done, truly a gem, did he die in the end? if so that would be so sad.

I thought you were gonna have both of them die in the ocean together. I want to bash some sense into them for being so stubborn. Too bad its too late for Katara to find out about Zuko and Mais break up...

Loved it, so beautiful and perfect but tragic. I cried at the end :) This is exactly the way a real Zutara story should be! Great job :D

This a good one-shot very tragic though I nearly cried while reading it.