Reviews for Chat-Up
Aelaer chapter 1 . 1/10/2017
This is so ridiculously adorable. Perfect.
3seconds chapter 1 . 5/12/2016
"I brought you a map." Thank you! This made me giggle out loud. Such a perfect Sherlock response. And your characterization of Molly (especially so early in the series) is spot on. I love her determination, even though the horrible awkwardness and self doubt. So happy this was included in the Canon Addicts collection, since I'd somehow missed it before now and the humor brightened my day. :)
englishtutor chapter 1 . 5/10/2016
This was just too funny! You write an adorable Molly. I'd love to see another chapter of this: "The continuing awkwardness of Molly and Sherlock!"
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
Oh my, poor Molly! Guess she lucked out though, for picking the one person in the universe more socially awkward than her, to the extent that he had no idea how she embarrassed herself since he did not even get what she was trying to say!
That was fun and awesomely hilarious.
applejacks0808 chapter 1 . 6/10/2015
I just found your story, and I just had to share with you how I busted out laughing here at work all while cringing at the awkwardness that is Molly. What a great story! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
Aww, poor Molly. There's really no reason to worry though, Sherlock is even worse than you are in this aspect. He probably had absolutely no idea what you were doing anyway XDDD
becgate chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Too funny! Loved every word! !
likingthistoomuch chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
Fantastic...bloody fantastic!
Reviewer chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
Good golly gorsh that was adorable. I'm not a sherlolly person myself (but then again, I'm not an OC person either but I ship Sherlock/ Eric so hard. I fall in love with your characters.) but this one really is quite awesome. Face splitting smile right from start to finish.

Fangirling aside, I really love your writing style. Your grasp of the characters and how you portray them is brilliant; your descriptions and lines of dialogue, character interactions and such flow really well.

I would really love it if you added a chapter to this in Sherlock's point of view.

Keep up the amazing work!
hatondog chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
This was hilarious! I'm not a Sherlock/Molly person, but I actually moaned out loud for her at that world class awful pick up line. Which would have been fine, except I'm waiting for a meeting to start and had to pretend I'd gotten a bad message. Hard to sell since I started laughing when he gave her a MAP. LOL, literally! I just discovered your work and can't wait to read more.
her illusion chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
LOL oh dear molly.
nimagine chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
Oh gosh. This is the most brilliant thing I've read in a long while. The second hand embarrassment was totally killing me. And then he actually brought her a map... Brilliant. Love your characterization, it's perfect for both of them. Thanks for writing this.
SN chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
That was wonderful and I loved it. :)
Esther Kirkland chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
OH MY GOSH THIS IS THE MOST ADORABLE THING. I have a bit of a hard time picturing Molly doing this totally on her own, but once she did you made this perfect. And Sherlock with the map *Muffled giggle* Oh my giddy aunt. This is the sweetest and most adorable thing and I totally accept it as headcanon. :D
Ballykissangel chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
Oh my word this made me laugh so hard! I loved this. Excellent job! This has got to be my favourite Molly story now and I love how you wrote Sherlock.
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