This is story is terrible, coming from a unbiased readers perspective it has no potential in the future no offense, it lacks a flow or actual character outlines. Overall I give it a D- I did not resort to an F grade because well, I felt nice about it.

Dude I agree completely with you and I actually really enjoy the lemons people write and the people that you talked about can rot in hell for eternity

It hurts knowing that you had to face prejudice just because some people didn't like the things you wrote. You shouldn't have to settle to the standards of what a bunch of biased critics think. If they don't like it, they shouldn't fucking read the story. That's what I say. This story was very good, and while I will admit that Sokka could use a break (he gets out of the sexist streak after episode 4 of season 1 I think), this is still a good story and I look forward to when you continue it. I will be forever hopeful. Good luck!

Pleas make more chapters of this story

Nice

I had hoped that this had updated and would continue, but it seems that hope was in vain. if this fic is going to continue then send me a PM and ill consider continuing to read it. if not then PM me anyways to let me know so I can remove it from my fav list.

GAAAAAH!. . .

No more Sokka bashing! He does his best to keep his tribe safe.

Very OOC.

I can't wait for more it seems really good.

I agree with the 5th and 6th statements 100%, as for number 4 you have given us Katarra's POV what about a Fire Nation POV discussing a credible mysterious threat (ie Naruto) as to get Azula and her group into the story sooner. As I believe stories of an incredibly skilled fighter with unusual fire-bending in the colonies would attract attention. This is under the assumption that Naruto is infiltrating the Fire Nation Colonies to get an understanding of their policies and governance. As an experienced Naruto would take his teachers words to heart.

I agree. I liked your opening chapter and hope to see more work from you.

don't let those idiots get to you. you're a pretty good writer and this story holds a lot of potential. hope that you get over your writers block and continue. I know how frustrating it can get and I can only give you One advise: take it easy. take your time and wait. if you get an idea write it on a note. afterwards you can expand on those ideas. a friend of mine gave me that advis and so far it worked like a charm. anyways, hang in there and don't give up. you have my support!

I say post your fics somewhere eles because this site has gone to shit. I mean for fucks sake if you rate your fic m then obviously its not for kids I mean there is no way for a kid to find fic with lemons in them unlessthey LOOK for them. Basically everyone of these asshats need to calm the fuck down and if there worried about parents then tell them like the ESRB for games does. Also what happend to freedom of the press

Good start, please update soon!

I hope you dont plan to abandon the stories that dont get the highest votes. Would be a real shame ;)

Nice start so far, a little too fast in some points, a little too close to the series in others, but all in all nice first chapter