Could Queen Bee even take control of Metallo? Either way this was a fantastic chapter. Batmans pov was especially well written. The dichotomy between his thoughts on himself and the other Batman and how you portrayed it was great. Next favorite would definitely have to be Martian Manhunters

Going back and re-reading this because I never got passed Paris due to life happening. This chapter was great and you've handled the emotional turmoil of each character well. Hopefully Batman opens up eventually even a little. I'm glad for your note on the bottom because I completely agree on the joker front. Looking forward to finishing this great story in the coming days

I didn't realise the first time I read this but your really good at writing fight scenes.

Holy crap this story was soooooo good.

every. single. word. was in character! great job!

I really like this story, good job. Also Japan? Yay!

There isn’t a whole lot of YJ fan fiction, much less good, completed ones, so I’m really glad I found this. I didn’t know what to expect, and despite having watched next to nothing I’d the JL cartoon, I enjoyed and was invested every second. I was connected to every character, and you did so wonderfully to demonstrate everyone's individual loving relationship with Wally. It was so sweet and lovely, and feeling their bonds through the screen was the best part and so heartwarming.
Thanks for writing this. The love you hold for the characters, especially Wally and the JL, was palpable and I could feel how happy you were writing this and was happy for you.
I hope you’ve YJ season 3 so far (although no Wally yet), and I’m wishing you the best.

This might be one of the best Young Justice book I have ever read. You are amazing. Can you please make a sequel.

Thank you. I needed this. Really

i love it absolutly wonderful job

I just discovered this story and absolutely loved it.
Amazing.

I wasn't sure what to make of this fic at the beginning after finding it mentioned in the tv tropes Young Justice fanfic recs, but I'm glad I decided to give it a chance. You spun a fascinating and engaging tale, and it was really hard to put this fic down. Despite my lack of knowledge of the assorted Justice League universes and extrapolating extra passage of time as the Team searched for Wally across the multistage multiverse, you managed to keep all the characters mostly true to what I know and remember. Additionally, the ones in the alternate universe that took Wally in were still recognizable And believable. And that is what marks a great fic.

Also, you made me laugh stupidly loud (after midnight, oops) with Wally's last line about the "souvenir". So kudos to you for that. ;)

Love the story, very well written and nice and heartwarming at the end there. I cried several times through the story.

hey, could you write a fanfic about what happens when the team gets thrown into the different dimensions? I dunno, I just thought it would be interesting, but I love fixations, and I reread this story soooo many times!

damn nice story.