Oh my lord. Best fanfic ever!

Omg the ending actually made me cry! This was so cute I'm dying!

well, you're right, they're both tremendously out of character. particularly jack. he's supposed to be a angry/rough/vicious sociopath and he acts more like ralph would act in this story. the writing is good, but jack is too out of character.

Aww! They're so adorable! And I saw in the summary that you used my last name for Ralph. I love Jack, he's just so much the wife in the relationship. Ralph's little speech was very Romeo-esque.

Oh god this fic I love it. I am literally in love with your interpretation of Roger. He's absolutely perfect (and all my headcanons about him are truuue yessss ily) and uuggghh. Also, do I smell Joger on the horizon? Because it sure as hell is wafting up my nostrils. :) Best jalph fanfic ever. (One request, hopefully I'm not coming off as pushy and it's not really a request, more of a suggestion: Roger in scrubs? Please?)
I will be watching this! Keep up the awesome work!

This is amazing! Please continue! This is by far one of the best Ralph and Jack stories I have ever read! I love it!

I hope I'm first but no matter, I had to read twice, it was that good. This was sweet and very tender (& naughty, but a good naughty) and I loved the Harry Potter stuff. Your talent just gets better and better sister.

Can you PLE-ASE try to update SOON? I LOVE this story!

This chapter was sooooo good oh my god. Just the way you set up the characters and everything with Roger was just...oh my goodness please update soon because this was amazing and I'm craving more!
P.S - I think Roger wants some stuff from Jack you know what I mean? Haha I'm rooting for both Jalph and Joger but...oh goodness haha this story just wraps me up and I want more and more! Amazing chapter as usual!:)

I have a feeling Ralph is going to show up for V-day. A long shot, but hey; that would be a GREAT present.

I'm suspicious of the motives of some of their friends, though. Roger needs to let up.

Great read!

This was REALLY sweet and I loved it.

I liked the romantic things Ralph says and how sappy they were. I loved the flashback.

It was so sad and bittersweet at the end!

One thing, though - if Ralph gone for 10 months or 8? You said both in different places.

Great stuff. Roger still seems like he's trying to make a move on Jack. Loved the Pub scene.

Amazing! Keep writing!

I think Ralph is getting jack...Ralph.

Oooh this is good! I'm from England and from what I know (limited knowledge in the realm of law, but still know the basics), I'm fairly sure you had it correct. Lovely job, I must say. I'm a sucker for Jalph :p Anyway, I'm not offended at all. This was brilllliannt :D Cheers! xx