| Reviews for An Unexpected Family |
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   Princess Peridot chapter 4 . 6/30/2013 Please continue this and can you put in a funny moment or two please ? |
| Audrey 1986 chapter 4 . 5/12/2013 nice fic |
| dpdp chapter 4 . 5/11/2013 Very nice. |
| lordessoftime-tau chapter 4 . 5/11/2013 I see a MASSIVE misunderstanding in the making! |
| Bookloverz22 chapter 4 . 5/11/2013 Loved it! Poor jack thinking that they are together! |
| Audrey 1986 chapter 3 . 5/1/2013 Nice fic |
| Bookloverz22 chapter 3 . 4/14/2013 Hahaha love it can't wait for more |
| lordessoftime-tau chapter 3 . 4/14/2013 Haha! Poor Daniel! |
| dpdp chapter 3 . 4/14/2013 Very cute. Like the story. looking forward to more. |
| dpdp chapter 2 . 4/12/2013 Nice. More pleaase. |
| iwrite4fun chapter 2 . 4/12/2013 I'm glad that I decided to continue reading after the first chapter. The spelling and other grammar errors had me worried, but the idea for the story kept me reading. I would suggest that you go back and do some improvements to chapter 1 because the second chapter of this story was very different from the first at least grammatically. The storyline is a great one and I'm looking forward to further chapters. |
| lordessoftime-tau chapter 2 . 4/11/2013 Much better now that you fixed some stuff! |
| Bookloverz22 chapter 1 . 3/25/2013 Can't wait to read more |
| lordessoftime-tau chapter 1 . 3/23/2013 Dude this a GREAT idea! Continue please but work on capitalitization. |
| The Jaded Captain chapter 1 . 3/23/2013 I'm not really sure about this one. I've seen one other story like this, so it's not a complete original idea. I do like the idea though, but I have one major problem and a minor one with this story. It's the grammar and how you skip lots if time thought a few sentences. I really do hope you can add more detail if you continue to write and post chapters on this story. Do you have a beta? If you don't, I highly recommend it. |
