I love sasuke in this story. He chose to talk, face problems, speak out his true feelings, think about the future with Naruto and so on. He acted like a grown-up not some kind of playboy or just pretended not caring anything. Both Naruto and Sasuke are so canon. They can be the best parents in the world. In all mpreg sn fics I had read, their babies always look like Sasuke and naruto. It’s kind of new that the baby girl in this work looks like their moms. I appreciate that. Also, I love your writing style. Reading this sweet and wonderful story is a precious moment for me. Thank you!

I totally agree that sasuke is not interested in women at all. This is so in the character.

Interesting story!

The story was very good. it was hard to keep putting it down when I had to do something else. hope you keep writing even more amazing stories like this one.

RK

Sweet

*sighs dreamily* I loved this, though I was highly upset at naruto. Don't jump to conclusions! And sakura, I felt like she said what she did, on purpose, to make naruto feel bad. But, I don't like her, so eh.

That's so fucking kawaii! And beautiful! U got me tearing up over here ;-;

Damn, picturing them all like that is so beautiful!

No u baka! That's cold u can't just leave him like that!

Welp! There'll be a baby soon! ;)

Thank you for the story!

those last few lines were so sweet

do not take this fic down!

I would like to admit I'm not into Mpreg too much, but I honestly enjoy reading your story. The reason would probably be Naruto... acting Naruto.

There were few mpreg I have read, and the moment Naruto became preggers and well... have children, his personality changes and he became a 'female'. That's why I can't imagine him being Naruto the 'male' anymore.

Yours though, even though he was pregnant, he was still acting Narutoish. He was not over obsessive with him being pregnant, and in fact was willing to have his child be adopted in case Sasuke doesn't want it. Meaning he still prioritized Sasuke (wherein those others I read had put his relationship with Sasuke at the backseat) and that, he did not transform into a hormonal woman who naturally would protect and love their children first and would have 180 degrees change of personality.

Yes he did want to have a few more children in the end, but again, he did not became a 'mother'. He acted as though he was a parent, but not a 'mother' who went into rampage just protecting his children.

You also put a huge smile on my face while reading this, especially when Naruto said about miraculously having a 'vag ina'... Hahahaha...

Thanks for all your hardwork!

Love just love