Good more

I really like the idea and concept behind this one.

I suppose Jazz and Ironhide would wear anyone down eventually.

Poor Unicron though, he has problems of his own.

The part with Unicron shouting at Sentinel, and Primus wondering how to shut Ironhide up was hilarious! I'd really want to read another one-shot like this.

That was awesome! I hope ya do a sequel to it or to show up what Unicron was facing.

At first I was like: Hilarious :D
Then when Ironhide said why he wanted to go back I was all: Awwww... Cute. What a sweetheart.

Please bring Jazz and Ironhide back! And you're welcome for the heads up. Cuz that was me.

OMP. I laughed so hard. This freaking awesome. I love the Dexter reference.

This was funny it made me giggle... i wanna see more

Pure GOLD. Please write more soon, so that we readers can read more of the awesomeness that is this story. I especially needed it because I just read a really depressing Fan Fic and needed the moral boost.

Hehehe

I defiantly want to see more

I love this story! I want to read moooore! Nao soon plz.

One word, Awesome. Definately would like to find out what happens
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OMG LOL Yes send the boys back\! I would love to see another chappy wth them back! XDDDDDDDDDDD

Omg! I love it! I really like how you have the interaction with Primus and his kids. I never really thought of it in this sense and I never seen anything else like it eather so props for original ideas! :D I would love it if you would keep going with the story, I feel like it has a good place to go to, and I bet you have some idea bunnies bouncing around in your head. Over all loved it!