continue

hope your still updating

Genial! Que buen capítulo de inicio. Pero que paso no vas a continuarlo,? Esperó que si

I like you story idea, it's not often you find a Fanfiction where Ash chooses to participate in both Pokemon Contest and gym battles. With that being said I'm hoping that Ash keeps his Aipom. Also will we be seeing any of Ash's older Pokemon making appearances.

Since Ash has decided to do contest alongside gym battles does that mean he's keeping Aipom. Also will ash rotate his Pokemon, because if he does it allows him to have a larger verity of Pokemon to use for Pokemon contest and gyms battles. Him using some of his older Pokemon would also be good because it would allow Ash to reconnect with some of the Pokemon he hasn't used in battle in year like Kingler, Totodile, Cyndaquil, and many others.

I for one agree with you. There are not many stories where Ash takes on both. You, my friend, have a real talent for writing. I loved how you incorporated humor into the serious parts because it reminded me of the actual T.V. show. This is just me, but I personally love Ash/Anabel. No matter what pairing you choose, I am sure the story will be amazing! I can not wait to read more and I hope that you will continue this awesome fanfic. AMAZING! _

You should really continue this story. It has a great opening and i see good pontential for it.

This is absolutely fascinating! I really, really hope you continue you it!

Hmm... How about the return of Harley

I'm a bit confused about Pikachu to be honest. By this time (looked it up don't watch the canon Ash's personality ruins the show for me) Pikachu would have competed in 5 different Elite-Class Tournaments. And yet he still LOST to a piplup of all things? Does he reset to level 0 each time they enter a new Region or something?

I like this story, I look forward to more from you.

Love the story

I really like the start of this story and I hope you can update soon.

Chica36

Well this could be interesting. It's an idea I've never really considered before and it has a lot of potential. I look forward to seeing more of this.

Keep up the good work!

i like this really much you should continue

interesting start, can't wait to see where you are gonna go from this. Doing the math Ash SHOULD be 15 at this point in time so you are correct with the ages. I stand by the Ho-oh theory being the reason Ash hasn't aged. That or VERY bad story telling. Keep up the good work.

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