Reviews for If Only the Sky Was Like Orange Gelati |
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Guest chapter 4 . 4/5/2015 One of the rare few has been found. It's always refreshing to see such a well written fanfic Good work, I probably shouldn't read something this awesome before exams :) |
Fier66 chapter 4 . 12/8/2014 Ah...so fluffy. So damn good! Gaius is smooooth. Thank you for making this, you're awesome. |
JumpyFTW chapter 4 . 3/29/2014 Awwww :3 |
avaire chapter 4 . 1/16/2014 Sweet gods, this was so cute. AHHHHH! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2013 i am marrying gaius soon..chrom gave me permission today. |
Mystic Mundane chapter 1 . 10/21/2013 I REALLY Love this story so much! Especially this pairing! :D I've never played the game, and only found it on Youtube by chance. |
StarfallNinetalesGirl chapter 4 . 8/24/2013 Love the ending! |
red lilies chapter 4 . 7/15/2013 Just a note: "Panic struck Gaius, but wrenching herself free, she through her arms around his neck" I had to reread this twice to realize you probably meant threw not through. Made more sense then. Loved the whole story. I'll admit, I really liked previous chapters more than this one - the kiss plus slugging scene just felt off for me - but then you nailed the ending and it was wonderful in spades. I loved the character portrayals, they felt so right, both Gaius and Bubbles. I enjoyed reading this as much (if not more. Actually, definitely more) than the original supports. I hope to read/see more of your work in the future! |
kageshoujo chapter 1 . 7/13/2013 Thanks for this sweet fic! I read it and was extremely pleased. It's well written, the fangirl in me is satisfied, and Gaius and Bubbles are in-character, as far as I am concerned! I'm glad of how you wrote Bubbles. She's totally adorable, and I also like how you kept her name and features mostly up to the reader-you only refer to her as "Bubbles", the nickname Gaius gives her, and aren't strict to instill her appearances. I find that a good thing since every fan of this ship can read it and see their MU in it. Seeing Gaius' small bits of jealousy were omg omg omg totally cute too. Job well done! |
ebonypol chapter 4 . 7/7/2013 Amazing! :D |
Mo-chan769 chapter 4 . 7/3/2013 I still love the little additions you made to the original support conversations to make this into a full-blown short story. *dreamy sigh* I also love the bits of humor, expecially the end when they lose track of the ring. Hahahaha! |
Cormag Ravenstaff chapter 4 . 7/3/2013 Good job! |
Sparks101 chapter 4 . 7/3/2013 Aw, that was so cute. I really did enjoy this story. Grest job! |
DreamKitsune chapter 4 . 7/3/2013 Dunno if you realized but for the final chapter you've referred to the avatar as bubbles. Like bubbles flushed, bubbles thought to herself, etc Don't take this to offense, just a thought Other than that it was great! Was ecstatic when you finally released this! |
SamKo chapter 3 . 6/27/2013 pasdfffdklsj pleAAASE tell me you're working on the final chapter?! You're SO well written and it all flows so well, much better than other attempts I've tried reading. Looking forward to seeing the final installment! |