This was a very pleasant read. Loved it. I would love a sequel

I love the first chapter it was heart warming. Kinda refreshing too to see that it’s sesshy who seems to be having some sort of conflict one sided love. This is just the first chapter I’m reading maybe I’m just getting ahead of myself but most fanfic rin is the one who’s first to show interest it’s annoying.

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that was cute, thank you for this fic

Of course he IS possessive! Hahahahaha he's a Dog Youkai.

I do really like your story, you have good ideas... It's just that you have a problem with verb tenses...

He doesn't** You make many mistakes, but your story is cool. I really like it. Thank you.

I loved it!

Awesome! I have always though that the Lady Mother was a mischievous lady but this takes the cake. Beautifully written. But one question : In some earlier chapter I read somewhere where they show Takeru thinking he feels bad for what he is about to do to Rin... Any thoughts on that?

Aww such a realistic chapter about Rin's timidity! I liked S's responses though! Nice end!

Rin is shy! Soooo cute of her. And Sesshomaru's mom is a trouble maker, is hilarious ! Great story!

Ha! I bet she is in shock... But is so sweet! Specially the lines they said.

With perhaps the arrival of the first grandchild hehe. That's how you end it.

Lol now I see how this blind folded works. But it is a risky one because Sesshoumaru could comes late. A few seconds of late would risk him losing Rin. Wow perfectly perfect timing. Awesome plan lady mother!

But will the rest really be ok with this? They were sort of like part of the game plan. This might upset them greatly.

Anyway the claiming prize is so cool so I can wait to see the next chapter haha

*high pitch cross between a laugh and cough* wow. Just WOW Sesshomaru, a little possessive, are we? (Maybe it comes with being an 'dog' demon ;P)