give me a new chapter please,this story is so so good
i need more

Hi
I Love,love,love your Story,never read anything like it
pls pls give us more chapters in the near future pls...
I cant wait to get more
Btw I also Love your Trailer for Shadows,the only thing i dont like about it
is the fact that its to short (-:
If you what do a longer version of it,i would be so so happy.
Well thank you for everything you have done so far,and sry if my writing is not the best.

And the plot thickens! I never know what you're gonna give us next! Ahh brilliant chapter! Hmm that Stuart.. Poor Amara, thinking they are still dead. I really hope Stephen updates her soon. Just to give her a sense of hope! I'm still reading and can't wait for more! ;)

i'm really curious to see how han fits into the story and just what they're doing to her.

great update!

don't keep us waiting too long!

D

YAY! Well, not for Dr. B, Amara, Han, Nattie, and *snickers* Zebadiah.

But YAY for an update!

Yay! New chapter. Please update again soon. I really do like this story

Wow I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw there was an update to this story. I don't wven want to talk about what I just read, those guys all have a screw loose. Nattie, Stuart, Zeb. And poor Hannah and Amara, just ugh.

Please update on the boys. What's happened since they escaped from the house? And Nikki, Phil and Claire too. I'm so glad you updated, I missed the shit out of this story. :)

I love it, please update soon.

I can't believe I've only found this story now! Amazing, amazing story. I'm not usually a fan of AU, but the skill with which you've written this is just wow. Looking forward to more!

I'm dumb. I missed where you mention Roman is April's brother! Well, that's one mystery solved for me. Lol

I'm just amazed by this whole story! I love this whole other universe you managed to invent. I'm sure there are a million other things I want to say but I just can't think of it quite yet.

Was April the mother of Roman's child or was she someone that he met after? Is Amara going to go against all of Stu's "suggestions" since she thinks that Seth is gone? So many questions! Looking forward to the next chapter!

THIS CHAPTER HAD ME HYPERVENTILATING..SO MANY TIMES THROUGHOUT THE CHAPTER I THOUGHT SOMETHING WAS GOING TO HAPPEN TO ONE OF THEM...I WAS LEGIT AT THE EDGE OF MY SEAT.

OH MY GOD THIS IS GREAT!

I think we were all dreading this chapter... The moment they came after Roman, Seth and Dean.. But thank god they survived! But Amara and April don't know that :( so April is Romans sister! Ahhh! Poor Nikki and the baby! Where will te men go now for safety? No where is safe it looks like... Fantastic chapter!

They escaped! Oh thank The Lord! This is progress at last. One step closer to finding all their loved ones. I hope there's more in the next chapter.

Thanks for the reveal about Roman being April's brother, but it only makes it sadder that the mother of his child is indeed dead. I wonder if he knows whether she's alive or not.

Awesome, badass chapter. Thank you.

Phew, glad the boys survived, but will the soldiers stop at that and not try to track them again?
Stuart you asshole, he was behind all of this and even being so cruel to leave the TV on the news for Amara to watch.
Loved it a lot, Josie! Bahibik awy! :*