cute story

Man, is Peter such a major ass (and talk about humiliating behavior towards Neal). I didn't think I could ever dislike him more than I already did... I was wrong.

Absolutely loved this story. Thanks for writing.

This was a wonderful story. i loved it.

Adorable :) Though I got all excited when Peter threatened to put Neal over his knee and then it didn't happen :( Maybe next time Peter will take him over his lap? Thanks for the story!

I hope little Alice isn't going to be as much of a handful as Neal is. He always manages to get into trouble, sometimes for wanting to be helpful, but mostly because he is a stubborn little boy at heart and has never had to face consecquences for his actions. I loved the story and, as always, and am hopefully waiting for the next adventure of Neal and baby Alice.

Love it...and the great ending...we have to great kids...Neal and Alice...but if Neal ever teaches Alice how to pick pockets or unlock doors he won't be sitting comfortable for months

Sweet story. I especially enjoyed the end with Neal painting the baby's room, and feeling like he belonged with Peter and El. I love how often you have Peter swat Neal when he's out of line during the story.I also liked Peter and Mozzie talking together about Neal's past with Mozzie. Thanks for posting.

awesome story looking forward to more

aww such a lovely story! :3

Absolutely a delight of a story.

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Oh, I got quite teary! that was a lovely ending (they may be fictional) ..but im so happy for them and Neal! haha!

Most excellent job on this story. I love the way they don't correct the nurse when she refers to Neal as their son.

Aww, so sweet! Neal will be such a great big brother :) And I love Peter and El making sure Neal knows he's loved and protected.

Super cute story!