Reviews for Little Lamb
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2017
You make a sequel since this is better than Fifty Shades of Gray and I didnt expect a pairing involving Seirra and Knockout as a couple.
DeadlyNightshade97 chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
No, I think you tackled his personality pretty much down to the point, and I like how you added the pain of his loss into the story, specifically how much it affected him. The detail was exquisite for a story such as this, and I must congratulate you on a job well done since not many lemons are as good as this one is. I'm tempted to ask for a sequel, just to see how she reacts to him in the future (doesn't have to be a lemon, but whatever)
BalanceSage chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
I'm such a sick person but...id like to see more of knock out and sierra i don't know if he would be quite so...viscious really i think he'd work her down to get to the "prize"
Lord Burmese chapter 1 . 10/21/2015
O_O this was soooo awkward for me to read, my name is Sierra
AnimeFangirl9000 chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
Wow that was good!( didn't mean to say it like that ) Best one-shot ever! Plz make one with another OC and Optimus ! Please...
till.there.was.lennon chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
The way you write Knock Out is perfect. Keep writing it the way you are!
StumbleAlong chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
Actually I think your portrayal of Knockout was spot-on. This would make a great multi-chapter fic, if you ever wanted to continue it.
StarSwoop chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Hawt! I love that your mind is as warped as mine ;) x
bookwormgirl1016 chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
it was good, it is kinda like the other story I am writing now
Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
plez right more
dancesontrains chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
Damn, that was beautifully done.
Meep chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
WOW! That was intense...But I liked it XDDD
Nightshade chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Not to bad! Knockout seems a bit scarier then Keystroke though! I understand where you are coming from when you say Knockout is a little hard to write about. I have complete faith in you though. I say so far so good! ;o)
OLD PROFILE - still beta-ing chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
I have an idea for you. As a quote.
"Silence Of The Lambs."
I would like the idea of Knock Out perhaps...finding more...prey?
Other than that, great story. I love horror stories.
Decepticom Fan chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
You know, I've read your stories previously (Cure My Tragedy and the Armada fics) and they were somewhat dark, but the scenes fit appropriately the way you wrote them.

Now, it seems as if you've switched to completely to nasty, kinky stories as your main genre. Needless to say, I am shocked.
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