Reviews for Trying Normal
bobbyneko chapter 15 . 10/18/2016
Awwwweeeooooommmmmeeeee!
Turn chapter 15 . 4/5/2010
That story was super! I really love it! Now I'm going to look for your other stories! Hopefully I'll find some more 1x4!
DanceOfTheEntWives chapter 15 . 8/6/2009
loved the ending! what a celebration that must've been _
Mirai Kurosaki chapter 15 . 6/25/2009
Fantastic!

I loved this story and I had read it many years ago on another website and I'm so glad I found it here so I can tell you how awesome it is! I have to say, I really appreciate you making Quatre stay in character. A lot of stories I've read in regards to Quatre seem to make him so weak.

So, thanks for just a great read :D *favs it*
killing u with umbrellas chapter 15 . 6/3/2009
i really enjoyed reading it. great job!
Chocoholic chapter 3 . 6/24/2007
This is a great story! Only, you use a lot of comma splices. Comma splices happen when 2 independent clauses are connected without a FANBOY or a semicolon.

ei:

“I can’t answer that, we don’t know what he’s thinking right now.”

That should be, "I can't answer that; we don't know what he's thinking right now." You could also separate the clauses with a period, making them both simple sentences.

Love the story~
Reina-183 chapter 2 . 6/19/2007
I really love this story! It's well thought out and well written. However, one small thing I noticed is that you seem to use 'to' instead of 'too.' For instance, when Wufei says "They claim that these coporations hold to much power," it should be 'too much.' Other than that, great job and I can't wait to read the rest.
firedraygon chapter 15 . 6/19/2007
Wow, I seriously love the way you end chapters. XD; Great work with this fic. I love the whole conspiracy plot and seeing Quatre as the main player in all the action makes me giddy.
RandomTopic chapter 15 . 5/16/2007
This was cool. The plot was good.
Parker J. Parker chapter 15 . 5/11/2007
Oh, I always debate whether or not to review old fics, but what the hell.

Loved it!

What else is there to say?

Very little, actually.

lovelove,

Parker
Mirai Kurosaki chapter 7 . 3/16/2007
Excellent chapter but was too short to satisfy my hunger. Even though this fic is going as your mind creates it, it's great!
Mirai Kurosaki chapter 6 . 3/16/2007
Hello! I hope to review every chapter but I'm so busy at the moment! I've decided to add it to my favorite story list so I can go back and read more! Thus far, it's wonderful! I love a little torture now and then so don't fret!

Your writing is excellent and I have to compliment you for it! I think you execute Heero's character wonderfully!

Will review the other chapters asap
Mysteriously Gone Account chapter 15 . 2/15/2007
Took me a few hours to read this but... Gods, was I hooked! At the beggining I thought it would be the typical GW high-school for Kat stuff, but I was delightfully mistaken!

Really, not only your writing style is very good (descritive but not too much, and with action and drama perfectly balanced...) and the plot was amazing!

I'm so glad I got to read this...! Aah, don't we all love 1x4?
BigSister2 chapter 15 . 10/27/2006
Yeah I've read this fic before, but I just got the sudden urge to read it again and dare I say it was better than the first time. It still gave me chills. I love fics like this so well written and so much detail and emotion. Plus I have a little soft spot for the pairing. Seriously its not enough of Heero/Quatre fics out there. But anyway just wanted to say Great Fic. Its full of awesomeness!
starshards chapter 15 . 9/19/2006
Absoultey loved it
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