Reviews for She's No You
odalys-ortiz chapter 2 . 1/9/2018
This is how it should end because really, these two couldn't stay away from each other anyway. They are like super strong magnets. Love this chapter getting all hot under the collar. Sorry Zoe and Cal but you can't change someone's heart just because it's not yours :)
odalys-ortiz chapter 1 . 1/9/2018
Oh boy, this can't go wrong in the slightest except of course it will because John is getting a little too into his fantasy although I don't mind because it's Joss he's thinking about :)
just no chapter 2 . 6/29/2014
Guess I'm old fashion don't sleep with someone else if u care love or just want who ur not sleeping with

Now what if zoe becomes pregnant or has an std now joss is f-ed over... What's john gonna say then?

Disappointed in all of them... Guess I was raised differently
FalconRukichi chapter 2 . 3/17/2014
Lol..poor zoe. But hot of careese. !
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
hahhaha no
ravenhusker chapter 2 . 2/13/2014
Now THAT was the ultimate fantasy. He was sexing Zoe while he was thinking of Carter? And called Zoe Carter's name? (And Joss slipped and called Beecher John a few times? What a mess these two are.) Plausible. She went over the edge with how far she went with the things she did to get him out of Rikers. He always did seem to be more than unusually focused on Carter from the beginning. Try borderline obsessive. Stalker, even (lol). And Zoe waited til the next morning to call him out on it? Must have been some goooooood sex! Don't get me wrong. Zoe makes me smile too, she's so cool. So, I don't blame John for going there for comfort (or Zoe). But Carter's my girl, and I like the dynamic between her and John more. There "connection" has been established from Day One. This was a good back and forth.
jakela chapter 2 . 4/6/2013
Favorite lines:
A week and it was still fresh in her mind. Fresh, but not in any way was it clean.

He looked delicious – is this what he was serving her for dinner?

The atmosphere was electric and they were ready to pop like a few rounds of ammunition.

Plus, Freudian slip, shoetingstar? See the use of the word 'my' in this sentence ;) :
He licked his way down her body, his pale fingers gently parting her juicy, dark lips as he slid them down my wet slit.
jakela chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Favorite line:
But she's so much more, isn't she? You pull that thread and you will unravel. "
lovemboth chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
Goodness! I'm kinda speechless right now. That was smutty BUT good.

This line struck me: He paced himself to kiss her, to travel explore her body, like he was studying a language, to learn every beautiful curve and inch of her by heart.

Brings to mind John Mayer's "Your Body is a Wonderland". I do love me some Sade though.

I hope to read more from you.
zeejack chapter 2 . 3/11/2013
a fantasy became reality. perfect. just perfect.
zeejack chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
wow who is redgrave, and how does he know so much? john is really seeing what he wants to see instead of who is really with him. lol, wonder if he's going to call out joss' name. i so hope not, that would be really shitty and make zoe feel like crap. not that i care how she feels but still!
ErinORiordan chapter 2 . 3/5/2013
Lost my heart just a little bit when John called Joss "sweetie" in his imagination. Oh my yes. Who is this Alastair Redgrave, weaver of tapestries? I'm very curious to know more of his story.
ErinORiordan chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Yum! It's sexy, but what I like best about it is that it engages the feels.
nicdvidmaker chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Enjoyed the story shoetingstar. Loved how Reese's mind was playing tricks on him. Good concept.
MBooker chapter 2 . 3/5/2013
Again I say... well now LOL

That Reese is something else! And Carter must be one bad girl... she has him calling her name and she isn't even in the room! Can I say I'm not mad at her LOL

I had all kinds of warm feels when Reese wondered what underwear Carter put on just for him. Were they red?

Those blue eyes setting Carter on fiyah! That was yum yum!
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