This was beautiful. From Emma crying because Hook made her laugh to Emma not wanting to leave the ship (and Hook) and deciding to stay for another hour or so. Hook showing concern for Emma was sweet. So beautiful. I adore(d) this one-shot. Nicely done.

Excellent one shot. It would be great to have a sequel to this scenario, but I am perfectly content as is. I just like to encourage when I think there is a lot of potential for continuing too. It is never meant to badger or say that something wasn't good enough. I liked the idea of where this was leading.

Aww sweet and sad. But that joke was hilarious. It is all the more funny/fitting because hook delievered and a pawn shop is a secondhand shop and his aim is to go after gold.

This story literally had me in hysterics. This was amazing and I just...
Ugh it just made me so happy I still am recovering from my spaz attack.

great story. I like that Emma is finally showing vulnerability.

Woah wait ouat and the good wife fics? Nice!

cool story so far

Awww, that was so cute. Gotta say, Hook trying to understand the cellphone was the best interpretation of that scene I've ever read. Coded message, lol. :) x x

*HannaH*

Aww so sweet! Really, I have no words!

I like this pairing you've written, even though I love Neal (only because he's Baelfire!) :)

Awwwwwwwww, sooooooo sweet!

you should turn this into a multi-chap fic.
:'D
please?

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Captain Hook is the REAL CHarming

And Captain Swan my OTP also 3

As far as technical stuff - a bit of word usage here, some grammar there - the story could maybe use a little polishing, but WHAT you're saying is lovely and I love you and when do you plan to write more fic for me? *blinkblink* What?

:)

This is terrific - I have a soft spot for exhausted Emma and caring Killian, and oh brother, I didn't plan for the alliteration but there it is. Loved the story. Thanks for sharing it with us.

beautiful :)