Great job! That moment between Ahsoka and Luminara was a nice touch- not something I expected! :)

OMG THAT WAS GREAT! I am greatly considering crying right now!

Brilliant, powerful and heart warming story! I think you've captured the thoughts and feelings of many fans of Ahsoka, including me. It was surprising just how hard it was to watch her walk away and the screen fade like it did but this story really shows what Ahsoka must have been feeling and you've done a fantastic job writing it down.

I also love how you included the bit about Revan at the start, it's shocking how similar his situation, the Exile's and Ahsoka's really are and I never would have thought of it had I not read this.

Again, fantastic story!

Sparks

Very powerful piece here. I seriously wonder what the writers intend for Ahsoka if this weekend's episode was not meant to be a grand finale. They seemed so anxious to write this arc and ending without any (apparent) thought as to what would happen to Ahsoka afterwards ... or where would she go. I am curious if they put Ahsoka in season 6 at all just to answer these questions. I swear I read that Ashley Eckstein extended her contract. If so, it's mind-boggling that they would pretty much relegate her popular character to bit-role status.

It's nice to know that Ahsoka still has some people who truly support her in this story. Your single chapter shows more support and friendly love than she had in the 4 part finale arc.

- Count Mallet -

I LOVE IT!

WHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAA! The FEELS!

Dude. That was amazing! I was tearing up, although yesterday's season finale has yet to sink in. Ahsoka was my favorite Jedi EVER, and it's odd to think that after seeing her for 5 years, she's gone. :(