Very sweet and fun! Thanks haha that town really seemed creepy at the start.

There's a little mistake with some mixed paragraphs on this chapter, around this ones:
"Not a good enough reason to carry my gun. If I carried it for every crazy person I met I would be armed for twenty-four hours straight thanks to you alone," she smirked slightly despite the situation that they were in. "Let me go talk to the sheriff about the car."

Lisbon made her way back into the small visitor center slash sheriff office. Jamie was sitting at her desk staring into space.

"Where is the sheriff?" Lisbon ordered. Jamie jumped at the sound of Lisbon voiced but compose herself quickly.

"Jane, maybe someone moved it?" She suggested.

"It was locked and I have the keys," he snapped at her as he walked around the space. "I parked it legally so it should be here."

"Jane, just settle down," Lisbon said in a soft voice hoping that he would calm down. She couldn't care less about his car but she knew well enough that he loved it, even if it was a death trap. "Let me go talk to the sheriff about the car."

Lisbon made her way back into the small visitor center/ sheriff office. Jamie was sitting at her desk staring into space.

"Where is the sheriff?" Lisbon ordered. Jamie jumped at the sound of Lisbon voiced but compose herself quickly.

"He is on a call."

I think you should check that.

Oh sweet thanks for the very good read thanks again

Enjoyable, and in character (especially for early in the series). Nicely woven, neatly solved mystery around which is the personal. The bickering and underlying feelings make a nice counterpoint. Thank you for writing it.

Why did she call Jane Abbott?

enjoyed from the very beginning to the very end

It's so sweet both of them have dreamt same dream.
I love ur story! Please keep writing wonderful stories :)

Wonderful!
those two last chapters were great! i loved it!

thank you for this awesome story, it was a pleasure to read :)

Hahaha I love it! You are such a tease. Lol.
I like the idea with the bra :p And Jane's dream was awesome.
I would love a M rated epilogue! Heeheez

Very fitting title for the chapter. I wish they were that open and honest to each other on TV!

Love your story.

AWESOME PLEASE KEEP WRITING

Awww, I really enjoyed this last chapter:) Great story!:D It was very well and very in character!

hahahaha! The ending scene is just priceless! Oh Jane would forget to put gass in his car! hahahaha!;D This is going to get better yet!

That sherrif gives me the damn creeps! haha. I loved when Jane accused Lisbon of being in love with him during their "fight". Her come back was just priceless!:D I am very interested to see what Lisbon ends up doing to that scum bag of a sherrif when her and Jane are both out of this mess! haha. Very nice chapter!:)

I like the restraint in this. Therre's no swelling music or sentimentality, just something that feels close to the truth. Well done :D And thans for sharing :) x