Seven Seas? there are only 4 seas in op! Get ur basic facts straight

What the hell is the Magi Magi no mi?

Her name is Avida, the -Sama is a title. That only needs to be added when someone is talking to them or abotu them.

For instance: That person was known as Alvida.

And another example "That's Alvida-Sama!"

Update soon, please!

updat uodat up date :)

why is shiro take all luffy fights? but other than that i like it

Finally the buggy arc is over..You wasted way too many chapters on buggy

*-* I'min love with your fic, and of course with shiro *-* love saddistic characters theymake me remind of myself so much *-*

I liked the beginning of the story but I had to stop reading at this point because it was to confusing. Remember to use paragraphs. A new paragraph should start at every new idea, and every time a different person speaks. This way the reader can read the story while understanding who says what and breaking it down into easy bits. REMEMBER GRAMMAR

While it certainly seems like an interesting story, it is pretty hard to read with the amount of dialogue, thoughts, facial expressions and other things your fitting in each paragraph.

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...SO, Shiro and Luffy BOTH have straw hats?

Of course Nami isn't going to join this early. They still have to deal with Arlong, remember?

Update soon, please.

When will Luffy find out that Roger is Gol D. Roger?

You should break up your paragraphs a little more. They're really hard to read as is.

So does Luffy know Roger was the previous Pirate King?

Update soon, please.