| Reviews for Enemies & Allies |
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Thief Rikku chapter 14 . 2/19/2005 YARGH! *jumps onto the chair and breaks it* Super-great fanfic! All Aoshi/Megumi fanfics are all superb and awesome! _ *thumbs up* You did a good job. Well done! *pats back* Ya know, I accidentally read the sequel to this and when I read the part where you summarized on how Megumi saved Aoshi and he returned the favour, I was thinking to myself why would you just summarize important events like these without writing the whole account out? And then baka me, I came across this fanficcy two days later. *slaps forehead* I am truly, a big baka. _ But anyways! I'm very happy to read this hehehehehe! *big smile* This fanfic was straightforward and everything (a lot of a/m fanfics i read so far always had these big, complicated words that i had to persistently consult a dictionary to know the meaning to haha *sweatdrop*). I love the way you organized the plot. Everything ran very smoothly! It's cool that you made a gradual progress when it came to Aoshi Megumi's relationship, like it would turn out to be if they ever did meet and work together after the show. ~~ Another Meg/Sano fan writing a Meg/Aoshi fanfic! haha, i won't be surprised if the whole a/m fanfics out there were written by m/s supporters. XD Anyways, I really enjoyed reading your lovely fanfic. Took me a couple of hours (periodic breaks between) to finish reading this nice piece of work. I was more than satisfied with this, knowing that there was the sequel to this (eep.. must review that later!) :D One of my favorite stories! |
PhoebeOtaku chapter 10 . 10/24/2004 normally i wait till the end to write a reveiw but i had to commend you on actually getting stuff about ballroom dancing right (you have no idea how often i've read about guys putting their hand on the girl's hip to lead something like tango, or other strangeness...) Yay latin ballroom dancing! sorry, being on a ballroom dance team makes me somewhat obsessive. the story is great too D |
dimonyo-anghel chapter 14 . 7/27/2004 i luv it! plz write more! |
rei chapter 14 . 6/1/2003 this fic is good! you have to make a sequel! |
Leila Winters chapter 14 . 4/15/2003 Aww...Aoshi too tired to travel? It seems so sad. The poor guy. But do like your story! Don't ya just love it when your characters are all confused and don't know what to feel? Those two will figure things out. Hee hee...HOW CUTE! Anyways, great story! |
Leila Winters chapter 10 . 4/15/2003 So glad you DID decide to turn it into a Meg/Aoshi fic! They really are very cute at the party. I liked that they thought about each other and Aoshi offers the dance. They're so cute! But Meg's been kidnapped! How cruel life is! Right when things were getting interesting between them! |
DraejonSoul chapter 14 . 11/16/2002 I don't know whether to cry or jump for joy at the conclusion. I mean, I can't WAIT for another Aoshi fix! (And yes, I AM back and back to the grind!) So I'm gonna be posting the rest of the fic on PiB... Hear from ya soon! _ Daiji |
test chapter 14 . 11/13/2002 started 11-08 updated 08-11 kind of aniversary :) i think misao is not going to like megumi ... |
Memphis Long chapter 12 . 11/10/2002 Cherie. I read the whole thing, including the fight scene (which you said wasn't that good, but you lie, lol). VERY WELL DONE. Congrats on finishing a most enjoyable story. _ |
AzaleaFaye chapter 14 . 11/9/2002 a very nice ending! obviously, you're going to have to write a sequel, right? you can't just leave your faithful readers hanging now! but anyways, congratulations in completing this story! you've made a lot of people happy! let me know when you've written the sequel, alrighty? good job again and have a nice day! Azaleafaye |
Girlquinndreamer chapter 14 . 11/8/2002 YaTaa! it's time to round the robin! so...who's gonna write first? can u? anyway, i figure aoshi wouldn't say anything to okina's comment. beating around the bush, eh? where did that phrase originate from? i remember that in the beginning you're all "it's not my intention to make this an aoshi/megumi" and now it's "i'm going to make an aoshi/megumi trilogy." well, who'd da thought, huh? anyway, i enjoyed reading this (it's your first major kenshin fic; congrats!) and i'm glad everyone else enjoyed it too! and yes, tea's on me; let's hope they have strawberry shortcake O_o Oro! |
KitKat chapter 14 . 11/8/2002 YAY! It's not totally over! Good ending tho! I'm looking forward to the sequel! |
Lady A chapter 14 . 11/8/2002 Ooh, they finallly realise their feelings for each other ;D i like the subtlity; they don't seem to be the sort of people who'd openly declare their feelings so soon. hee, but i wonder what'd have happened if Yuuta hadn't been there _~ Please do write the sequel! |
Sissi chapter 14 . 11/8/2002 Wow, I loved it! Hai, I'd be delighted to see a sequel to this story *grins*. And, by the way, I loved the way you wrote about Aoshi, it just made me love him more and more...*sighs*. And, also, in the sequel, could you please qrite more Megumi/Aoshi interactions? I'm a huge Megumi/Aoshi supporter and I'd like to read more good stories like this, envolving those two. Anyway, it was a great job this one. |
Sissi chapter 13 . 11/7/2002 Wow, this story is great! Awesome! Wonderful! I loved the way you write it, and the plot is very interesting and let's say, intriguing . So, what else can I say? Keep doing this great job 'cause now, I've totally fallen in love with this fanfic. I'll review every chapter if it may be an incentivation for you to keep writing this gorgeous story. |