Please give us mooore

Please write more! I love this!

I love it and I would love to have more please!

I like it but Raven is smart and basically a well versed person but in here I make her look like a 13 ur old thts making this all up
But still keep writing
U might change my mind

So . . . I'm falling in love with this story. Is that weird?

D'awwww raven. So adorable! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I think everytime I discover another of your stories, I always end up just wishing I could write with you. I absolutely love this idea, and I will admit that I kind of balked at it for a second... but then I dove into it and I could not stop reading. Both this one and "Broken" are phenomenal and I L-O-V-E-D reading it. So much. I think the only thing that I saw was that it started out kind of fast, but then once you found your pace it slowed down at had this great rhythm to it. I wish I could say that I had some other deep critique on the story, but I don't. I just love looking at it, and I want to read more. That's all.

So... keep up the good work, because I will be eagerly awaiting more.

:D

I'm sorry I didn't mention this before, but I don't have an account. That's why you couldn't find me and write to me. But you're still a total sweetheart for reaching out to me.

Other than not capitalizing in the apostrophe marks like, 'Well, duh' and 'We'll see' and not putting a period after 'Dr', you did well. Those are just small little tidbits. I was so surprised that you uploaded so quickly, I'm proud of you!

Loving you secretly from the shadows,

Whisper Dark Rose

Ooh I love this. Not enough AquaRaven stories out there.
Can't wait for an update.

Garth? ...