Would love to see this story continue... any chance you'll be updating it again?

I feel really bad for Fusco. That's a terrible decision to have to make, with no clear right option, if there is a right option at all.

I've only just recently watched "The Golden Compass" and I'm working on the book now. Your story really intrigues me and I'd love to read more - please don't let this story fall to the wayside!

I'm really enjoying this.

I am definitely liking using the daemons to reflect the emotional state of our heroes. I really like Nadia and Zipporah. I'm a bit disturbed that Joss and Victor have not been able to heal their bond. Victor is not going to like it when John saves Joss's life, is he?

okay, this is new&novel for me. I'll keep looking for updates.

I loved this, it's a really different take on Team Machine. I've always imagined John to be like an alpha wolf and Carter is definitely like a dog - very loyal.

Interesting take on our gang. I notice That both John and Carter have dog daemons.

Looking forward to more of the story.