I really did enjoy the fighting scene you painted in this. I can imagine it looking really good in a manga type art. Great work!

This is my absolute favorite fanfic of all time and I love it.

Sten is my favorite character in the game and I was so excited to have read something that kept him in character the whole time. Your narration of his emotions and thoughts was very well done. Well written!

well...that was a thing. and undeniably hot. Odd that I've never read a Sten thing before. Size kink and all, eh? I have to say that it's very well written and angry!sex was icing on the cake. Ironic that Sten finds the Warden's inability to stay on the path maddening and then turns around and becomes distracted from his own goal. Very very nice. And the way their personalities clash is just wonderfully described. And the touch of 'awwww' at the end made me cheer inside. I have no crit for this, I saw no typos or clunky phrasing at all. It was what it was. Short and sweet. Well...maybe not so sweet. LOL. XD

Love it. Don't change a thing. It's incredibly irresistibly sexy and it's oh so hot. You are talented indeed. Do you have any more goodies?

This is absolutely amazing. I love Sten and the fact that you can't romance him upsets me. I had been wanting to read some Dragon Age fan fiction and this happened to be my first. And I'm really glad it was. I loved the way you wrote it.

hun, you don't need to change a thing about this story. well done

Sundalo gamay, you have donne a great job to write this story. Very much details around the characters. You played well with their emotions and let your readers share this moments with your characters. The smut scene is also very detailed and well worked out. One of the best erotic story's i've ever read. Thank you for sharing the story with us. Wir sehen uns im Afterlife, sunshine. 3

This is the best sten story I've ever read.

Damn, that was a sexy scene with them in the water and the whole waterfall background you painted. I love your imagery, and the way you write really adds to the smut (which is good in itself, too!) I'd say keep the story as it is, you really did a great job here!

Leave it as it is. I really enjoyed it.

That was really hot.

Ahhh! You write for Dragon Age too? I think this is the first smut story I've read of yours besides Carnal Fire! I've never considered Sten in the romantic sense, but you definitely pulled it off here! Steamy scene, nice job! )