| Reviews for The Continuous Objection! |
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The Spectator chapter 56 . 4/11/2015 Sometimes I wonder why the court just goes along with Apollo every time he uses his bracelet. Besides that this is getting interesting. |
Guest chapter 23 . 4/11/2015 This is getting interesting and I like how there are plot twists at every corner, I have to keep reading. |
The Spectator chapter 13 . 4/10/2015 Von Karma isn't that hard, one of they keys is having her say fool or foolish such as foolish fool who foolishly makes foolish mistakes, and don't forget the whip |
Shadow-DJ chapter 93 . 2/23/2014 Nice story, dude. Can't wait to see the third one and please keep up the good work. |
1230james chapter 93 . 2/23/2014 AWWWWW YEAHHH! BEST. ENDING. EVAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR! *knocks over Sprite from overcheering* lol: Pearl's expression. Come on Pearls, Nick does everything BUT normal. You'd think he'd wait? And Maya leaned forward, not Nick. PEARL, YO' ARGUMENT IS INVALID! *Cornered 2001* |
Hikari R chapter 93 . 2/23/2014 LOVED IT. LOVED IT ALL THE WAY THROUGH. You know, I actually feel... happy. Satisfied. Usually, when I've finished reading/writing a fanfiction, I like it, but there's something missing. But yours, oh no, your fanfictions are amazing. No... Indescribable (...is "indescribable" describing this fanfiction? ...nvm). I'm so looking forward to OLO (One Last Objection)! Best of luck to you! -Hikari R. |
Secret Wind chapter 92 . 2/19/2014 OMG. You mentioned Athena, where was she through our the story? |
1230james chapter 92 . 2/17/2014 Awww yeah epic chapter. -grabs popcorn and an extra can of Sprite- PREPARE TO BE PWNED STEPHEN! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA -popcorn munch break- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA -sip break- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA- *cough cough* |
AceFangirl chapter 92 . 2/16/2014 Way to save the day, Polly! Loved this chapter, it's all coming together now. Come on, Phoenix, you got this! Even if writing the first paragraph or two was painstakingly, you did great! Can't wait for the final showdown to begin! |
Hikari R chapter 92 . 2/15/2014 Great job on this chapter! Good luck, Phoenix! And good luck to you, too! Your writing is just... perfect. How do you do it?! And Happy (belated) Valentine's Day! |
Bird of the Stars chapter 91 . 2/6/2014 Wow, this story is so good I have to admit. After I finished "Objection" and read Continuous Objection, I thought wow what an development in your writing skills. I have to admit, when I read Continuous Objection I thought in the beginning that you are going a bit off the track, but in the end I thought. "Wow I was so wrong". The story is also very original with a lot off unexpected events! :) Only one hint from me; Try to do more unexpected, even though it makes the reader angrier, it will be fun to read like that part that Polly was attacked or that he kissed with Maya! But short: Keep going with the good work! :D |
ANONGUYPERSON chapter 90 . 2/3/2014 My life now consists only of refreshing this page, waiting for Chapter 91. |
Hikari R chapter 91 . 2/5/2014 WOW. This was beautiful. Just... wow. And was Phoenix "proposing" to Maya?! (*w*) This be aweome. |
1230james chapter 90 . 1/31/2014 Auuugggghhh that ending in this chapter. It's nagging me! It's terrible I say! Phoenix just jumps to the point. Hmm, but then again, even I, with my epic logic, wouldn't think straight after a moment like that... I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER NAO. MUST. KNOW. MAYA'S. AND. PEARL'S. REACTIOOOONNSSS! |
AceFangirl chapter 90 . 1/30/2014 Well this was an amazing chapter. So a chance encounter lead to all this... MindBlown. This whole time, Stephen just wanted to prove he didn't kill his girlfriend? Well, becoming a psychotic serial killer is not how I would've done it, but I guess everyone has their thing. Seriously just wow, this chapter explains so much, but I still have so many questions. Did he kill Valerie or is he innocent? Phoenix said it! He said he loves Maya! So sweet! |