Wheee! Happy ending. I don't ship Thommy (or any slash for any fandom really, except-selfishly, Thomas with my OCs Tony (pre-series) and Walter (AU S3/4). But this was interesting. Might write a version of my own with this as the inspiration (that means I'd give credit to you, don't worry) without Thommy. One quick question: what was Phillip's motive for kidnapping Jimmy? Scandal? Just plain sex? Revenge? To drug him again because he liked drugging him (jk)?! Kind of rhetorical question seeing as I don't have an account (yet) so you can't contact me. Oh well. Someday I'll have an account and I'll remember to ask you again. Anyway, this was good. Keep up the good work!

nice work

well done! It did get wrapped up pretty quickly... but I kind of liked the positive/sweet ending without any more harm done to Jimmy.

This was good! It seemed to go a bit quickly and this last chapter was a tad choppy, but I really liked the plot and the twist there! Keep working on transitions and descriptive language. Nice job!

Curious to read more! Next chapter please :) oh god I want to punch the Duke right in the face XD

OH MY GOD! Never has a fanfic got my heart beating so fast! Oh God whats gonna happen to Jimmy? This is all too good please update again? Pretty Please? Do you want me to die from suspense? Lol Awesome i love this fic.

Good job! I'm mad that the Duke is back though! :)

I hate Duke!

I like it a lot so far!

Loved it! Pretty suspensful! So does Jimmy not know what happened?

Oh my gosh this was so sweet! I loved how Thomas can be so tender even after everything Jimmy did. Great job! And somebody run the Duke over with a steam engine. Really.

I'm really enjoying this so far - hope Jimmy is better soon! Looking forward to the next chapter :)

awesome!

Will Jimmy soon be better?

riske!
Im interested to see what happens next. Its a complicated siuation to sort out.

that Dukes a bad bad man!

I'm now hooked! Please post part 2 soon!