Damn this hasn't been updated in three years. Really would have liked to see more but as with my own work, life gets in the way. Loved every moment of this, really enjoyed Takeo's character. And hey, if you ever feel like writing again, don't be intimidated by how long its been or if you feel your writing hasn't improved. You got this.

oke, I would like the next part now :)

I'm really enjoying this fic so far, and am looking forward to reading more.

Interesting! I'm looking forward to more. Good luck on the next chapter!

Ferret don't do this to me man DON'T DO IT! definitely my favorite KS fix out there, but those cliff hangers, UGH! I can totally imagine his heartbeat going irregular toward the end there, and the OST Moment of Decision playing in the background. In fact, ima read it again with that ost! Thanks for the good read! ;)

This is gettin interesting indeed... :3

Dang, I wasn't expecting that. This is getting really good.

Definitely already one of the best KS fics out there. Well written through and through!

I'm SO glad this got updated! Good stuff, friend!

Keep up the good work!

This is a good story! You've done a great job. Cant wait to read more ( hint hint)
Dont rush yourself though. Gotta give it a good try to make a good story.

Chapter 2 and the feels are already real.

Mmm. This is very good, and I hope it isn't abandoned. Please update soon.

"Has there ever been a story of more woe, than of Hisao and Hanako?"

That line. It killed me. Right here.x))

Seriously though, I've only gotten into the KS fandom (having just finished the VN a few days ago) and this is quite a fic you got there. Takeo as an OC is rather amusing to say the least, and I like that , while he's a big part of the tale, it doesn't take any spotlight away from Lilly, Hisao and Hanako.

Hoping you continue this again soon!

- K.O.B

This is really good. Kinda sad that it hasn't been updated in so long, though...

Hope to see more at some point!

That entire exchange at the airport and the discussion of Hokkaido is suspiciously similar to Lilly's homecoming scene in

s/8342000/2/Continuity

Which is to say that some of the lines and scenarios are extremely similar, up to the point where I recognized at least two sentences or so that were pretty much the same with slightly different wording.

Is this just a coincidence? Does it have to do with Lilly's story-path (which I haven't seen yet)? Is there anything going on here, or am I just imagining things?