I can't wait to read the rest!

Brilliant strory.

Absolutely loved this!

No it doesn't! The door slAMMING SOUNDS LIKE MY HEART SHATTERING! ;A; -Cat.

Whoa, this story was amazing. I was so nervous when I read the Angst warning and honestly thought that little fight they had on their one month anniversary was it.

Boy was I wrong...

Anyway, incredible as per usual, and I love the plot and the like. Nothing in this story made me wonder why it was there and the like so I think this was a really good story. Amazing writing, and amazing... uh... well just amazing.

Taila xx

No words are enough so I'll just say kudos... and gotta admit that i cried... yeah, too many things I identified with.

Great story. :)

this could have almost been part hurt/comfort but the progression to their breakup and then to them getting back together was done well enough that it wasn't too heartbreaking to handle and i didn't end up crying (just teared up a bit). and in the end everything turned out well, also the b&b was a great idea and the old woman spilling the beans about the proposal plans was pretty great. also derek trying to gas stiles in the car with taco bell fumes was hilarious

and there's the real heartbreak! you had me tearing up as stiles progressively acknowledged the differences in their relationship

AWWWW poor both of them! the realization has finally been made and they both got a taste of the heartbreak. here's hoping derek doesn't revert to being pure angst once they sort this all out

oh i've been fearing this moment the whole time, when they actually begin to figure out that the fairy queen's spell is actually why derek's been all lovey. oh man, this has the potential to become heartbreaking

You. This story. Perfection. Thank you.

This was the perfect blend of humor, sweetness, angst, and heartbreak. I adored it all. You captured Stiles to perfection and asshole Derek was spot on. It takes A LOT to make me laugh out loud and you managed to do this at least a handful of times. Most notably "Angry gorillas throwing shit at startled safari-goers." made me snort iced tea up my nose. Thanks for that. :)

I was completely on that swing set, hanging upside down along with Stiles. When he broke, I broke. When he melted, I was the puddle next to him. You had me from the start and kept me to the end. I delved in and finished in one sitting, couldn't stop reading even if I tried.

Favorite scene? There are too many so I will only mention this one:

"He understands what it means, now, to pour everything he has into a kiss. He kisses for all of the times Derek picked him up after work, he kisses for the wry exchange of jokes, he kisses for the faith Derek always had in Stiles' worth, for that sweaty afternoon on the living room floor, for Derek's awkwardness that appeared at the most unexpected times, for swing sets and chocolate and stupid teddy bears and a warm bed and a warm heart.

Then he pulls away."

I died a little from this.

My only qualm and this is probably just me, while nice, I felt the epilogue might have been unnecessary. I thought the end of Ch. 14 was a rather perfect way to end the story. Don't get me wrong, I completely understand how difficult it is to say goodbye to a story, heck, as just a reader I had serious attachment and withdrawal issues once I reached the end of this, but personally I thought the epilogue might've done that final scene in Ch. 14 a little disservice, that kiss and falling into each other was just too perfect an ending to the trajectory leading up to it. Rather than another 3k words, I think a paragraph or a few sentences would've tied it up nicely or even leaving it as it is, But again, that's just me, what do I know?

Again, thank you a thousand times for sharing this. I've favorited for re-readability.

"Parrot phase"
That was AWESOME! Ahahaha

Kudos!

At first I was like WTF?! But then I laughed! I can just see Isaac slapping Scott like "Bitch snap out of it"! and then Boyd leaving like " Fuck that sh!t! I'm out of here!". So yeah ... KUDOS!

I loved the writing in this, so much. Just the expressions, and the Stilesness, I don't even know. Seriously, you're awesome.

Dear writer,
i have to say this fic was... AWESOME. I loved it. So so much. The freaking roller coaster almost killed me. Maybe i'm exagerating but it was soooo sweet and marvellous that it's worth it.
Every thing said then.
XxX