Yay!

lovely little piece

gosh that is a real romantic moment.

red.

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please write more about this *-*
very good *-*

How did I miss this story? So hot.

Love this. :)

I'm new to the Elementary fanfiction scene, and this was the first story that captured my interest. I was not disappointed. I love style you used to write this. It was simple, yet elegant. Thank you for writing this and sharing it, so that I could read it today. Very well done!

It is beautiful, every sentence like a heartbeat. Thank you!

You did such a great job with this! I love how there is no dialog and you still got the point across! Very well done! :)

Love it - thanks for writing! They are already getting good at the eye contact communication, and your story takes it to another level.
Hope you write more :)

I always feel like they're going to make contact like this every time they have one of their moments on the show. That chemistry and tension between them! Thank you for allowing to happen what the show won't. And doing it so damn well. The atmosphere you painted here is incredible! Hope you continue this and/or write more Sherlock/Joan.

Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

That was good, too bad it was short chapter.

Lovely. It reads like poetry or a dream.

well done!