Great!

I really liked this one shot, congrats on making a good story!

OMG this was amazing. Absolutely loved it. You're incredibly talented!

re-reading this again- another fantastic writing from you! the different feels from this story invoked from me makes this memorable and especially love how perceptive David is with killian's action

"Another tick mark on the list of people who hated him". Fantastic writing and discovery of Hook as he finds himself in Storybrooke, the land with magic where the Crocodile has a good life and love and he, Hook is everybody's worst villain. You write Emma's hysteria really well, it's a real thing, it feels just like you wrote it. The comparisons of Neal's behavior to his father's, Hook protecting Emma from Neal, and protecting her pain from her parents was excellent. There is so much to your Hook, it's wonderful. Thanks for writing.

As much as i hate hook for Shooting Belle...
This is a very interesting mask i had not considered before. Jolly Good Read.

Hello. Can I start by telling you that your fics are amazing? This is one of the best fanfics I0ve ever read about the whole Neal debacle. I love how you get the characters so right and ake their interactions seems so fluid and natural. It's completely what I had imagined when this happened in the second season, and reading this makes both my heart break and fly. You have a gift with words and you make me want to try to go back to writing (which is something that used to thrill me). Thank you for your beautiful work and I can only hope that when I start writing again I'll do it half as well as you do.
(Sorry for my english, it's not my mother tongue).

Wonderful! Wish there was more.

lovely

Excellent one shot. Good story! That would have been a nice what if scenario.

This was beautiful. I loved it!

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Don't ask me why, but I keep forgetting that Milah is/was a grandmother in the sense of where Henry stands in the family line. Course...this family's relations keep getting more insane so maybe I should give myself a little leeway. Still, you have a point with your story in Neal's involvement. I don't dislike the guy, but at the same time I do NOT want he and Emma back together. I think that ship has long since sailed.

Thank you for sharing :)

I find myself cursing there is no "next" button for chapter 2.

The characters are dead on, and while you didn't know the full Hook/Bae story yet, you did a very good job capturing what they would have been like.

I love how, for once, her parents aren't anti-Hook-they actually see his actions.

And the bar scene was awesome.

I love Dave's last line.

I Know this story is almost a year old, but I WANT MORE.

This started out so funny then turned into serious business. I love furious Emma's head talk about the barfly, and then her drunk ramblings. Loved Hook's fierce protectiveness of her when Neal came looking for her. Wish there were more :)