this is really good, i think i need a sequel or continue this. Please...

this thing need sekuel. i love it with all my heart!

I know this is super old but I love it so much! I think this fic was one of the first to introduce me to Psycho Pass fanfiction and I really wanted to review and express my thanks for writing it! I think the concept is fantastic and it really makes me want to explore it more. Like how Kougami is a Cloud and Kagari is a Sun. I can see Gino being the Storm, Masaoka the Rain for how he’s the calm collected one that offers Akane advice all the time, and Yayoi as the Lightning in her steadfast manner and eventual firm trust in Akane. Which of course makes Makishima the Mist in all of this. Anywho, thank you so much for writing this, I love coming back every so often to read it again, and hope you have fun with whatever story and whatever fandom you enter next.

I hope you continue this! Its awesome!

That was AWESOME!
You should totally write a sequel or continue it.
Im sure a lot of people would appreciate that
Thank for the fanfiction

I love it!

AWESOME.

If this actually happened, so many of my favorite characters would have lived TT_TT I love this story!

This is SOOO GOOD! NO, IT'S BRILLIANT! TTTT I really like your writing style here and it looks natural that I didn't even feel the OOCness you talked about. I think the characterization is normal :D And their feelings really struck me hard. They're exchange is perfect!
LOL One thing though... even though I agree about how Makishima is most likely Mukuro and Byakuran's descendant, I still can't accept it and can't get a hold of it! Hahaha XD mainly because... let's just say 'cause I'm Byakuran's girl! *grins* Anyways, is there a chance that you will make a sequel? Ohhh! If that's the case then that would be cool! ;)

more?

This was AMAZING. Absolutely loved it.

the feels (ノД)・・。

This was absolutely beautiful and I actually wish this were longer. Anyways, thanks for the great fic and I hope you have a wonderful day.

KYOUUUYAAAAAAAA! -cries-

"You are so much like them I wish to toss you off the building," he commented as he strode after the herbivore leisurely.
Makishima raised an eyebrow, "Like who, Guardian-san?" This man was nothing like Kougami Shinya, he had realized. Whereas his target was analytical and an interesting toy, this one was...
Monster was the best word he could think of.
"Your ancestors, marshmallow-pineapple herbivore," Hibari said curtly.
Makishima narrowed his eyes. "What ancestors do you speak of?"
"The damn marshmallow and the annoying pineapple."
"Look, Guardian-sa-"
"Silence, herbivore."

Hibari always have great ways of explaining as good as Yamamoto's. It's my favorite part.