I love your writing style! Such a lovely story

Aw, it's kinda nice. I like their little bonding scenes.

im stalking you
seriously though man
i love you

and sometimes i scream and cry and sob when i see that you. haven't. updated.

you probably have sh/t to do and stuff
but
what about fanfiction? lo siento... pero yo quiero...

and, P.S. don't forget about catalysis
heehee imma stalker fufufufu
dont sue me
im just a creepily obsessed yandere with dreams of fanfic updates

i was kidding
really

just
just update okay

Somehow I got the impression that Japan has a lot more challenge than even the International stage. *weak laugh*
Oh well, it seems like in the end there's some sort of change in the way the play their...'game'.
Glad that in the end it worked well, and intrigued by the vague nature of Ryoma's hunger. Is it some sort of want for challenge? Or is it just a way to say Ryoma's a bit unstable? It'd be very interesting if Ryoma really has some kind of mental constitution. Maybe it would be like your other 8059 fic in which Gokudera's as crazy as...well, a mad person could be.

Nice piece to return to ff with! Loved it!